Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
When I just returned home from a training meeting, I heard from my younger sister that my mom was hospitalized because of her cerebral arteriosclerosis. She has had this disease for many years. When she got sick, she could not speak clearly, even could not speak, and her hands were shaking badly. The doctor said that because of her age, there were no good methods to treat the disease. Under the present circumstances, it can only be maintained.
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Journal 12/07/20
When I justJust after returneding home from a training meeting, I heard from my younger sister that my mom washad been hospitalized because of her cerebral arteriosclerosis.
Just after returning home from a training meeting, I heard from my younger sister that my mom had been hospitalized because of her cerebral arteriosclerosis.
She has had this disease for many years.
When she got sick, she could not speak clearly, even could not speak, and h or sometimes even speak at all. Her hands wereould also shakinge badly.
When she got sick, she could not speak clearly or sometimes even speak at all. Her hands would also shake badly.
The doctor said that because of her age, there were no good methods to treat the disease.
Under the present circumstances, it can only be maintainedkept under control to a certain degree.
Under the present circumstances, it can only be kept under control to a certain degree.
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Nice work again! I wish the best of luck for your mother.
Dec. 9, 2020
Thank you very much.
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When I just returned home from a training meeting, I heard from my younger sister that my mom was hospitalized because of her cerebral arteriosclerosis.
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She has had this disease for many years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When she got sick, she could not speak clearly, even could not speak, and her hands were shaking badly.
When she got sick, she could not speak clearly |
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The doctor said that because of her age, there were no good methods to treat the disease. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Under the present circumstances, it can only be maintained.
Under the present circumstances, it can only be |
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