Sept. 12, 2021
A Traffic Accident
The other day, a taxi driver died because of a subarachnoid hemorrhage while he was driving, and then the taxi lost control and five pedestrians were injured or dead. I feel sorry for them, and I think these kinds of accidents can be averted by technology. In this case, if the taxi had automatic braking, it wouldn't run onto the sidewalk. Moreover, fatal accidents due to reckless driving or speeding will disappear on the day when fully automatic driving will be in use. Some people criticize technology because it destroys the environment or kills people, but I believe it's vise versa.
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A Traffic Accident
The other day, a taxi driver died because of a subarachnoid hemorrhage while he was driving, and then the taxi. He lost control of the taxi and five pedestrians were injured or dea/killed.
The other day, a taxi driver died because of a subarachnoid hemorrhage while he was driving. He lost control of the taxi and five pedestrians were injured/killed.
I feel sorry for them victims, and I think these kinds of accidents canould be averted by using technology.
I feel sorry for the victims, and I think these kinds of accidents could be averted by using technology.
In this case, if the taxi had had automatic braking, it wouldn't runhave been able to drive onto the sidewalk.
In this case, if the taxi had had automatic braking, it wouldn't have been able to drive onto the sidewalk.
The most natural form of this sentence is past perfect.
Moreover, on the day we're able to implement fully automatic driving, fatal accidents due tocaused by reckless driving or speeding will disappear on the day when fully automatic driving will be in usevernight.
Moreover, on the day we're able to implement fully automatic driving, fatal accidents caused by reckless driving or speeding will disappear overnight.
Some people criticize technology because it destroys the environment or kills people, but I believe it's vise versathe opposite is true.
Some people criticize technology because it destroys the environment or kills people, but I believe the opposite is true.
"Vice-versa" is usually reserved for when you state two things and want to say that a relationship is true both ways. For example: "Jeanette is mad at David, and vice versa." means that both Jeanette and David are both mad at each other.
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This was an interesting - albeit slightly morbid - topic! I'm sorry to hear about what happened to both the driver and the pedestrians. Using technology to prevent this is an interesting idea, but I would warn against the idea of relying too heavily on it - the first thing I think when it comes to self-driving cars is "how does a pedestrian cross a road filled with self-driving cars?". It's easy to argue you could build underpasses or bridges or something, but then you get into a few other arguments surrounding crime in underpasses, and perhaps more relevant to the conversation, whether car-centric planning is a good idea at all. That depends on who you ask, I suppose, though it is an interesting subject nonetheless.
この話題は面白いですね！ちょっと暗いけど（笑）。その事故の結果は本当に残念なことですね。そのようなことを防ぐためにテクノロジーを使うのは興味深い話ですけど歩行者が道路を渡りたい場面は必ずありますので、使い過ぎないほうがいいと思います。アンダーパスや陸橋を作ることができますけど、アンダーパスや陸橋を作るという考え方の中心は人ではなく車ですね？それに、アンダーパスで犯罪行為が起こりやすいしね。どっちにしても、この話題は間違いなく興味深いことですね。書いてくれて、ありがとうございます。
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The other day, a taxi driver died because of a subarachnoid hemorrhage while he was driving, and then the taxi lost control and five pedestrians were injured or dead.
The other day, a taxi driver died because of a subarachnoid hemorrhage while he was driving |
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I feel sorry for them, and I think these kinds of accidents can be averted by technology.
I feel sorry for the |
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In this case, if the taxi had automatic braking, it wouldn't run onto the sidewalk.
In this case, if the taxi had had automatic braking, it wouldn't The most natural form of this sentence is past perfect. |
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Moreover, fatal accidents due to reckless driving or speeding will disappear on the day when fully automatic driving will be in use.
Moreover, on the day we're able to implement fully automatic driving, fatal accidents |
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Some people criticize technology because it destroys the environment or kills people, but I believe it's vise versa.
Some people criticize technology because it destroys the environment or kills people, but I believe "Vice-versa" is usually reserved for when you state two things and want to say that a relationship is true both ways. For example: "Jeanette is mad at David, and vice versa." means that both Jeanette and David are both mad at each other. |
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