yesterday
The book
My math teacher. She's gived to me a book of her trip to Morocco, this book is special because, it was made in 1979. Yesterday. I read this book and It was beautiful, this book was writting by Mohamed
My math teacher.
Not a sentence on its own, combine with the next one
She's gived to me a book ofgave me a book yesterday from her trip to Morocco, t. This book is special because, it was made in 1979.
"has given" or "gave" are the two past tenses of "give"
"a book of her trip to Morocco" would be a book that described her trip to Morocco.
Yesterday.
Incomplete sentence, better to move yesterday into the previous sentence.
I read this book and Iit was beautiful, this book was writting en by Mohamed
"written" and "wrote" are the two past tense versions of "write". Of these "written" is used in the passive voice like this sentence. Alternatively you could say "Mohamed wrote this book"
My math teacher.
Incomplete sentence; has subject but no predicate (verb). Remove the period and make it a part of your next sentence!
She's gived to me a book of her trip to Morocco, this book is special because, it was made in 1979.
Correct version: gave me a book of her trip to Morocco. This book was special because it was made in 1979.
Yesterday.
Incomplete sentence, yesterday is subject but has no verb attached. Remove the period and make it apart of the next sentence.
I read this book and It was beautiful, this book was writting by Mohamed
Correction: Yesterday I read this book and it was beautiful. This book was written by Mohammed
Feedback
Not bad! I easily understood the ideas you were trying to express! You just need to work on the tenses for your verbs and when to use periods.
My math teacher.
This is not a complete sentence so we should remove the period her and connect to the next sentence.
She's gived to megave me yesterday a book of her trip to Morocco, t. This book is special because, it was made in 1979.
Yesterday.
You should include this detail in the previous sentence.
I read this book and Iit was beautiful, t. This book was writting en by Mohamed.
The bBook
My math teacher gifted me a book of her trip to Morocco.
She's gived to me a book of her trip to Morocco, tThis book is special because, it was made in 1979.
Yesterday., I read this book by Mohamed.
I read this book and It was beautiful, this book was writting by Mohamedthought it was beautiful.
My math teacher.
"My math teacher." is not a complete sentence, so I added it to the next one.
She'sMy math teacher giaved to me a book ofabout her trip to Morocco, t. This book is special because, it was made in 1979.
Yesterday, I read this book, and Iit was beautiful, t. This book was writting en by Mohamed.
I combined "Yesterday," and "I read this book..." It sounds more natural. You can also say, "Mohamed wrote this book."
Feedback
Great job! Keep up the good work. Not many serious mistakes. I believe that if you keep writing daily, it will help improve your grammar output.
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My math teacher.
"My math teacher." is not a complete sentence, so I added it to the next one. My math teacher gifted me a book of her trip to Morocco. My math teacher This is not a complete sentence so we should remove the period her and connect to the next sentence. My math teacher. Incomplete sentence; has subject but no predicate (verb). Remove the period and make it a part of your next sentence! My math teacher Not a sentence on its own, combine with the next one |
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She's gived to me a book of her trip to Morocco, this book is special because, it was made in 1979.
She's gived to me a book of her trip to Morocco, this book is special because, it was made in 1979. Correct version: gave me a book of her trip to Morocco. This book was special because it was made in 1979.
"has given" or "gave" are the two past tenses of "give" "a book of her trip to Morocco" would be a book that described her trip to Morocco. |
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Yesterday. Yesterday
You should include this detail in the previous sentence. Yesterday. Incomplete sentence, yesterday is subject but has no verb attached. Remove the period and make it apart of the next sentence.
Incomplete sentence, better to move yesterday into the previous sentence. |
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I read this book and It was beautiful, this book was writting by Mohamed Yesterday, I read this book, and I combined "Yesterday," and "I read this book..." It sounds more natural. You can also say, "Mohamed wrote this book." I I read this book and I read this book and It was beautiful, this book was writting by Mohamed Correction: Yesterday I read this book and it was beautiful. This book was written by Mohammed I read this book and "written" and "wrote" are the two past tense versions of "write". Of these "written" is used in the passive voice like this sentence. Alternatively you could say "Mohamed wrote this book" |
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