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Writing Challenge, Day 84

Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge. I asked to my sister if accept to go by her car to Algiers, she and I, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because is holidays. We wish make surprise to see my nephew and my nieces and my mother here.

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Writing Challenge, Day 84

Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge.

Writing Challenge, Day 84

Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge.

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We wish maketo surprise to see mymy mother, nephew and my nieces and my mother there.

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Best wishes for a Christmas full of joys and a New Year filled with happiness.

Writing Challenge, Day 84


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Today is the 84th day of my daily English challenge.


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I asked to my sister if accept to go by her car to Algiers, she and I, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because is holidays.


I asked to my sister if accept to go bywhether we can drive her car to Algiers, she and I, and make ao we can surprise to our family because there are no reservation by planeplane reservations are now closed because isof the holidays. I asked my sister whether we can drive her car to Algiers so we can surprise our family because plane reservations are now closed because of the holidays.

How sweet! Alternative phrasing: Plane reservations are closed because of the holidays so I asked my sister if we can use her car to drive to Algiers to surprise our family.

I asked to my sister if accept to go bywe could use her car to go to Algiers, shjust me and Iher, and make a surprise to our family because there are no reservation by plane because isnt any plane tickets due to the holidays. I asked to my sister if we could use her car to go to Algiers, just me and her, and surprise our family because there arent any plane tickets due to the holidays.

We wish make surprise to see my nephew and my nieces and my mother here.


We wish maketo surprise to see mymy mother, nephew and my nieces and my mother there. We wish to surprise my mother, nephew and nieces there.

We wish maketo surprise to see my nephew and myour nephew, nieces, and my mother here. We wish to surprise our nephew, nieces, and my mother here.

Saying family would be clearer in this case

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