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The End of the Book "Divergent" (Spoiled)

Yesterday, I just finished the first book of the series Divergent. I started to read it 2 months ago, and read 1 chapter a day.
I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and enjoy the reading at the same time.
When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated, I didn't understand everything.
But I think, with the habit of the author's writting style, I started to understant more and more, until understand almost everything.
I really felt a big difference in my comprehensuon between when I started the book and when I finished it.

The story was really cool. So many things happened and the characters were really well developped.
I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at tve same time. It was difficult to understand her feelings!
When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like that. At the beginning, it's like an utopian, but it quickly turned into a dystopian. At the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death.
During her journey and her initiation test like they called it, she met Tobias (he's often called "Four" because he only had 4 fears when he did the exam with the fear landscape) and she fell in love. They're really cute together and it was funny to see the hiden part of Tobias's character, because he often looks tough whereas he's so kind with Tris.

To conclude, I really loved the story, but just think that the end should have been better, because so much happened in a really short time. I just received today the two next books, so I will start this evening to read them!

I hope you enjoyed reading my text! Please tell me what you thought of my English!

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The End of the Book "Divergent" (Spoiled)

Yesterday, I just finished the first book of the series Divergent.

I started to read it 2 months ago, and read 1 chapter a day.

I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and enjoy the reading at the same time.

When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated, I didn't understand everything.

The story was really cool.

It was difficult to understand her feelings!

When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like that.

During her journey and her initiation test like they called it, she met Tobias (he's often called "Four" because he only had 4 fears when he did the exam with the fear landscape) and she fell in love.

To conclude, I really loved the story, but just think that the end should have been better, because so much happened in a really short time.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text!

Please tell me what you thought of my English!

I started to read it 2 months ago, and read 1 chapter a day.

The story was really cool.

It was difficult to understand her feelings!

They're really cute together and it was funny to see the hiden part of Tobias's character, because he often looks tough whereas he's so kind with Tris.

To conclude, I really loved the story, but just think that the end should have been better, because so much happened in a really short time.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text!

Please tell me what you thought of my English!

The End of the Book "Divergent" (Spoiled)


The End of the Book "Divergent" (Spoiled) The End of the Book "Divergent" (Spoiled)

We usually write "Spoiler Alert," rather than "Spoiled," but "Spoiled" does communicate the message in a gramatically correct way.

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Yesterday, I just finished the first book of the series Divergent.


Yesterday, I just finished the first book of the series Divergent. Yesterday, I finished the first book of the series Divergent.

We can use "just" to mean something that happened yesterday, but we wouldn't say yesterday. We would only ever mention the time if it happened very recently, i.e., a few seconds. Examples: "I just found this a few seconds ago" A: "I just finished the book" B: "When" A: "Yesterday"

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I started to read it 2 months ago, and read 1 chapter a day.


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I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and enjoy the reading at the same time.


I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and can enjoy the reading at the same time. I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and can enjoy the reading at the same time.

I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and enjoying the reading at the same time. I decided to read it in English so that I'm improving my English and enjoying the reading at the same time.

You could also just use the non -ing forms, but it must be consistent.

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When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated, I didn't understand everything.


When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated,. I didn't understand everything. When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated. I didn't understand everything.

When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated,; I didn't understand everything. When I started to read it, it was a bit complicated; I didn't understand everything.

"I didn't understand everything" is an independent clause, which warrants a semi-colon.

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But I think, with the habit of the author's writting style, I started to understant more and more, until understand almost everything.


But I think, with the habit of the author's writting style, I started to understantd more and more, until I understanood almost everything. But I think with the habit of the author's writing style, I started to understand more and more, until I understood almost everything.

But I think, with the habit of the author's writting style, I started to understantd more and more, until I understanood almost everything. But I think, with the habit of the author's writing style, I started to understand more and more, until I understood almost everything.

But I think, with the habit of the author's writting style, I started to understantd more and more, until understand almost everything. But I think, with the habit of the author's writing style, I started to understand more and more, until understand almost everything.

I really felt a big difference in my comprehensuon between when I started the book and when I finished it.


I really felt a big difference in my comprehensuion between when I started the book and when I finished it. I really felt a big difference in my comprehension between when I started the book and when I finished it.

I really felt a big difference in my comprehensuion between when I started the book and when I finished it. I really felt a big difference in my comprehension between when I started the book and when I finished it.

I think that was just a typo.

I really felt a big difference in my comprehensuion between when I started the book and when I finished it. I really felt a big difference in my comprehension between when I started the book and when I finished it.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text!


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Please tell me what you thought of my English!


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The story was really cool.


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So many things happened and the characters were really well developped.


So many things happened and the characters were really well developped. So many things happened and the characters were really well developed.

So many things happened; and the characters were really well developped. So many things happened; and the characters were really well developed.

So many things happened and the characters were really well developped. So many things happened and the characters were really well developed.

I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at tve same time.


I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at tvhe same time. I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at the same time.

I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at tvhe same time. I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at the same time.

I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at tvhe same time. I loved Tris because she was brave and mysterious at the same time.

It was difficult to understand her feelings!


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When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like that.


When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like that. When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like that.

Could say - I didn't think the end would be like that - I didn't see the ending coming

When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look like thatthe way it did. When I started to read it, I didn't think the end would look the way it did.

Since you haven't discussed the ending yet, we wouldn't use "like that."

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At the beginning, it's like an utopian, but it quickly turned into a dystopian.


At the beginning, it's like an utopian, but it quickly turned into a dystopian. At the beginning, it's like a utopia, but it quickly turned into a dystopia.

At the beginning, it's like an utopian, but it quickly turned into a dystopian. At the beginning, it's like an utopia, but it quickly turned into a dystopia.

During her journey and her initiation test like they called it, she met Tobias (he's often called "Four" because he only had 4 fears when he did the exam with the fear landscape) and she fell in love.


During her journey and her initiation test like, as they called it, she met Tobias (hHe's often called "Four" because he only had 4 fears when he did the exam with the fear landscape.) and she fell in love. During her journey and her initiation test, as they called it, she met Tobias (He's often called "Four" because he only had 4 fears when he did the exam with the fear landscape.) and she fell in love.

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They're really cute together and it was funny to see the hiden part of Tobias's character, because he often looks tough whereas he's so kind with Tris.


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They're really cute together and it was funny to see the hidden part of Tobias's character, because he often looks tough whereas he's so kind with Tris. They're really cute together and it was funny to see the hidden part of Tobias's character, because he often looks tough whereas he's so kind with Tris.

To conclude, I really loved the story, but just think that the end should have been better, because so much happened in a really short time.


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I just received today the two next books, so I will start this evening to read them!


I just received today the two next books, so I will start this evening I'll starto reading them! I just received today the two next books, so this evening I'll start reading them!

I justToday, I received today the two nexthe next two books, so I will start this evening to read themo read them this evening! Today, I received the next two books, so I will start to read them this evening!

I just received today the twohe next two books today, so I will start this evening to read them! I just received the next two books today, so I will start this evening to read them!

At the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death.


AtIn the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found it weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death. In the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found it weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death.

At the end, both of Tris's parents died, and I found weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death weird. At the end, both of Tris' parents died, and I found the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death weird.

Where you put "weird" was ok, but less natural.

At the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found it weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death. At the end, both Tris's parents died, and I found it weird the fact that Tris didn't look that sad after their death.

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