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I met some stuffed Iriomote wildcats.
Unfortunately, that cat is listed as a critically endangered species.
Actually, only 100 individuals are thought to be living on that island.
In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivers' speeds are limited to 40km/hr at maximum.

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I metsaw some stuffed Iriomote wildcats (recently).

Unfortunately, that cat is listed as a critically endangered species.

Actually, only 100 individuals(wildcats) are thought to be living on that island.

That's so sad.

In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivebeing hit by cars', speed limits are limited to 40km/hr at maximum.

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Nice work and thank you for telling us about this.

I met some stuffed Iriomote wildcats.

I would personally prefer "taxidermied" or "stuffed."

Unfortunately, that cat is listed as a critically endangered species.

ActuallyIn fact, only 100 individuals are thought to be living on that island.

"Actually" would be used more to contradict something that had been previously stated or implied.

In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivers'accidents, driver have a speeds are limited to of 40km/hr at maximum[throughout the island?].

Or "vehicular collisions." "Speed limit" already implies that this is the maximum, but if you want to emphasize that this restriction is extensive, you could add something like what I have at the end.

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Hi gure_fish, I converted this text to a journal. It was originally posted by you under prompts, but it read more like a journal to me.

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I met some stuffed Iriomote wildcats.


I met some stuffed Iriomote wildcats.

I would personally prefer "taxidermied" or "stuffed."

I metsaw some stuffed Iriomote wildcats (recently).

Unfortunately, that cat is listed as a critically endangered species.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually, only 100 individuals are thought to be living on that island.


ActuallyIn fact, only 100 individuals are thought to be living on that island.

"Actually" would be used more to contradict something that had been previously stated or implied.

Actually, only 100 individuals(wildcats) are thought to be living on that island.

That's so sad.

In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivers' speeds are limited to 40km/hr at maximum.


In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivers'accidents, driver have a speeds are limited to of 40km/hr at maximum[throughout the island?].

Or "vehicular collisions." "Speed limit" already implies that this is the maximum, but if you want to emphasize that this restriction is extensive, you could add something like what I have at the end.

In order to decrease the risk of car strikes, the drivebeing hit by cars', speed limits are limited to 40km/hr at maximum.

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