Jan. 29, 2021
Gundam Factory Yokohama
I love Yokohama!
I want to buy a house over there.
If you know some good property agent please let me know.
This is a new tourist attraction just opened last month.
I would say the best weapon from Japan.
That is coolest “factory” in the world.
I wish I can work there, even just a simple office clerk.
But I think I will try my best even illegally to get inside the cockpit.
Anyway, when the virus stop, when Japan allow us to visit.
That is my first stop.
They should also build a hotel inside.
I can just live there forever.
Gundam Factory Yokohama
I love Yokohama!
I want to buy a house over there.
If you know someany good property agents please let me know.
This is a new tourist attraction which just opened last month.
I would say that it showcases the best weaponary from Japan.
Not entirely sure what you meant here but maybe like this?
That isIt's the coolest “factory” in the world.
I wish I canould work there, even as just a simple office clerk.
Anyway, when the virus stop, whenpandemic ends, Japan will allow us to visit.
That iswill be my first stop.
They should also build a hotel inside.
I can justould live there forever.
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I would say the best weapon from Japan. I would say that it showcases the best weaponary from Japan. Not entirely sure what you meant here but maybe like this? |
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I love Yokohama! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to buy a house over there. I want to buy a house |
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If you know some good property agent please let me know. If you know |
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This is a new tourist attraction just opened last month. This is a new tourist attraction which just opened last month. |
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That is coolest “factory” in the world.
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I wish I can work there, even just a simple office clerk. I wish I c |
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But I think I will try my best even illegally to get inside the cockpit. |
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Anyway, when the virus stop, when Japan allow us to visit. Anyway, when the |
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That is my first stop. That |
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They should also build a hotel inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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