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Jan. 10, 2022

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Gulten free diet

I have started a gulten free diet lately following my friend's advice. I hope that my allegic symptoms will improve. Since gulten free products are bit pricey, I make gulten free food by myself. But, they are so tasty that I have to be careful not to eat too much !


<p>友人のアドバイスに従い、最近グルテンフリーの食生活を始めました。アレルギー症状が改善されるのを期待してます。グルテンフリーのものはちょっと高いので自分で作ってます。でも美味しすぎて食べ過ぎに注意しなくては!</p>

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Since guluten -free products are a bit pricey, I make guluten -free food by myself.

The other person made great corrections. There was just a small one that was missed here, the "_a_ bit pricey". It is absent in Japanese, but here it is important!

Lately I have started a guluten free diet lately, following my friend's advice.

I hope that my allergic symptoms will improve.

I'm hoping that my -

also works!

Since guluten free products are bit pricey, I (like to) make guluten free foodmeals by myself.

some would write it - 'gluten-free'
meals sounds a bit better.

ButHowever, they are so tasty that I have to be careful not to eat too much !

don't start a sentence with 'But'!
'However' works here. No space before exclamation marks.

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Well done! :) just remember to spell it GLuten. Keep it up.

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kay

Jan. 10, 2022

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Glad to receive a prompt feedback. Since it was my first post, I was really excited. It is really helpful. I will make sure to check spelling before post and never foget GLUTEN :) Thank you!!!

Gulten free diet


I have started a gulten free diet lately following my friend's advice.


Lately I have started a guluten free diet lately, following my friend's advice.

I hope that my allegic symptoms will improve.


I hope that my allergic symptoms will improve.

I'm hoping that my - also works!

Since gulten free products are bit pricey, I make gulten free food by myself.


Since guluten free products are bit pricey, I (like to) make guluten free foodmeals by myself.

some would write it - 'gluten-free' meals sounds a bit better.

Since guluten -free products are a bit pricey, I make guluten -free food by myself.

The other person made great corrections. There was just a small one that was missed here, the "_a_ bit pricey". It is absent in Japanese, but here it is important!

But, they are so tasty that I have to be careful not to eat too much !


ButHowever, they are so tasty that I have to be careful not to eat too much !

don't start a sentence with 'But'! 'However' works here. No space before exclamation marks.

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