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Life in its stages
People will go through different stages in their lifetime.
Whimsical youth and stable middle-age.
Emergence of wisdom as hair whitens.
And tea will meet you in every moment.
When you get into drinking tea, it gives you time to sit relax.
Well, drinking tea is a very personal thing.
Everyone has their own preferences.
My favorite is black tea.
Lapsang Souchong is my cup of tea.
人这辈子会经历不同的阶段。
年少时，异想天开。中年时，安稳踏实。
到了满头银发的年纪，就慢慢有了智慧。
而茶，会陪你走过生命里的每一个时刻。
当你开始喝茶的时候，你有时间坐下来放松。
嗯，喝茶是一件非常个人的事情。
每个人都有自己的喜好。
我最喜欢的是红茶。
正山小种正合我的口味。
Life in its stages
People will go through different stages in their lifetime.
This sounds a bit more natural. It makes it sound like a general statement about life: in life, we all go through different stages.
Whimsical youth and stable middle-age.
EThe emergence of wisdom as hair whitens.
And tea will meet you in every moment.
Or: "And tea will be there to meet you for every stage."
There is nothing wrong with your sentence, but this alternative option I have provided is a bit more natural
When you get into drinking tea, it gives you time to sitjust sit and relax.
Well, dDrinking tea is a very personal thing.
No need for well here. You could also join this sentence to the next sentence, ie. "Drinking tea is a very personal thing, and everyone has their own preferences."
Everyone has their own preferences.
My favorite is black tea.
Lapsang Souchong is my cup of tea.
Nice pun! :)
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Great work! You clearly have an excellent grasp of the English language.
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Life in its stages This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People will go through different stages in their lifetime. People This sounds a bit more natural. It makes it sound like a general statement about life: in life, we all go through different stages. |
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Whimsical youth and stable middle-age. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Emergence of wisdom as hair whitens.
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And tea will meet you in every moment. And tea will meet you in every moment. Or: "And tea will be there to meet you for every stage." There is nothing wrong with your sentence, but this alternative option I have provided is a bit more natural |
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When you get into drinking tea, it gives you time to sit relax. When you get into drinking tea, it gives you time to |
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Well, drinking tea is a very personal thing.
No need for well here. You could also join this sentence to the next sentence, ie. "Drinking tea is a very personal thing, and everyone has their own preferences." |
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Everyone has their own preferences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favorite is black tea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Lapsang Souchong is my cup of tea. Lapsang Souchong is my cup of tea. Nice pun! :) |
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