I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering, "How can I be a better person?". I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering, How can I be a better person?

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I think it's important because it gives you an objective every day, you know you want to be the best version of yourself. I think it's important because it gives you an objective every day, you know you want to be the best version of yourself.

He/she/it = add an S to the end of the verb (in most cases) The word “objective” sounds a little unnatural, but it works

Sport iss are really important so you can go, like going to the gym or working out at home to keep yourself healthy, or also practiceing sport with friends. Sports are really important, like going to the gym or working out at home to keep yourself healthy, or also practicing sport with friends.

1. When referring to sports, we make the noun plural 2. It sounds better if you remove “so you can go”

The sSchool is really important too so you must study everyday and not wait until the day of the exams to learn your lessonsthe material. School is really important too so you must study everyday and not wait until the day of the exams to learn the material.

1. “The” is not needed in this context 2. The word “until” is missing 3. “Your lessons” sounds odd, and “the material” sounds more natural

Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you to meet other people. Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you meet other people.

I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage byover other people. I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage over other people.

Thanks for reading ! Thanks for reading!