Past facilities there and at other universities have included restaurants, computerr facilities, games and cinemas, among other services and attractions. Past facilities there and at other universities have included restaurants, computer facilities, games and cinemas, among other services and attractions.

What could make it sound more natural? What could make it sound more natural?

To make it sound more natural, you don't need to include titles for what you write about. For example, writing 'introduction and context' or '-typical facilities.' Also, make sure that the text is written in paragraphs because it will be easier to read.

Leisure activities for the new university's new recreation centre: a proposal Leisure activities for the university's new recreation centre: a proposal

Word order. 'New' before 'university' implies the university is new.

Students in our university have been complaining for years about the lack of basic facilities for students to spend their free time in*. Students in our university have been complaining for years about the lack of basic facilities for students to spend their free time in*.

* Added 'in' as a preposition.

They are not services directly related withto education, though they are expected in either universityies. They are not services directly related to education, though they are expected in universities.

There are two ofservices, in particular, which are indispensable for eithera higher education centre: a restaurant and a gym. There are two services, in particular, which are indispensable for a higher education centre: a restaurant and a gym.

AsWith regards to the first one, With regards to the first one,

the incomes from this facility, since then. the income from this facility, since then.

Therefore, it will be a profitable service. Therefore, it will be a profitable service.

added a comma

A gym plays a major role in students' life at university and it is essential in high school* to promote a healthy way of life. A gym plays a major role in students' life at university and it is essential in high school* to promote a healthy way of life.

Do you mean high school or university here?

there is no point ofin having such a quality sports fields without a good gym for teams in the differents sports teams to train in. there is no point in having a quality sports field without a good gym for different sports teams to train in.

The plentinessabundance of space in this new centre will let to developstudents work on other activities. The abundance of space in this new centre will let students work on other activities.

In this regard, I propose: language exchanginge and In this regard, I propose language exchange and

a) Exchange languaLanguage exchange club between natives and Erasmus' students. Language exchange club between natives and Erasmus students

Word order. You don't need the apostrophe for possession here.

low level in Spanish just as native students do in English. low level in Spanish just as native students do in English.

as an good opportunity for students from differents countries and cultures to get to know each other (or one to another?).* as a good opportunity for students from different countries and cultures to get to know each other (or one another?).*

'Get to know each other' is correct. You don't need 'to' if you want to say 'get to know one another'.

b) cClimbing wall Climbing wall

There haves been a boom in this sport since it was included atin the Oliympycsic Games, otherwise, t. There There has been a boom in this sport since it was included in the Olympic Games. There

Removed 'otherwise'.

are not climbing gyms neither other closerclose to any of the universities even nor in the city. are not climbing gyms close to any of the universities nor in the city.

Therefore, it is a potenctially profitable facility to be Therefore, it is a potentially profitable facility to be

taken into account infor the recreational centre. taken into account for the recreational centre.

To conclude, basic services such as catering and a gym must be backcessible to our university. (students). To conclude, basic services such as catering and a gym must be accessible to our university (students).

Adding 'students' makes it sound better but it is not necessary.

would be interesting and exclusiveunusual activities to be doneincluded in the centre. would be interesting and unusual activities to be included in the centre.

Unusual works better here.