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Nov. 22, 2020

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Grimm

我变得痴迷的Grimm节目。 我不可停看着它。我不知道为什么。 虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢这些主题。

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我变得痴迷的Grimm节目。

obsess [ 痴迷]
I don't think this good word using in here.
Let me translate what you said:
I become obsessive Grimm shows

我不可停看着它。

I can't stop looking at it.
in my feeling, you are looking an objection.

no like " watching"

虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。

性 in a single word, it means sex

虽然= though

虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。
Although, I think it has a lot of good sex. [ that I read in Chinese]

第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢这些主题。

First, it talks about ghosts and gods and I like these themes.

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flintstone

Nov. 23, 2020

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Thanks a lot

Grimm

我变得痴迷的Grimm节目让我痴迷

我不可停看着它看着它我无法停下来

我不知道为什么。

虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。

I don’t know what you are trying to say.

第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢的一些主题。

如果仅此一项,就没必要用“第一个”了。

我变得痴迷的Grimm节目。


我变得痴迷的Grimm节目让我痴迷

我变得痴迷的Grimm节目。

obsess [ 痴迷] I don't think this good word using in here. Let me translate what you said: I become obsessive Grimm shows

我不可停看着它。


我不可停看着它看着它我无法停下来

我不可停看着它。

I can't stop looking at it. in my feeling, you are looking an objection. no like " watching"

我不知道为什么。


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虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。


虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。

I don’t know what you are trying to say.

虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。

性 in a single word, it means sex 虽然= though 虽然, 我觉得它有很多好的性。 Although, I think it has a lot of good sex. [ that I read in Chinese]

第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢这些主题。


第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢的一些主题。

如果仅此一项,就没必要用“第一个”了。

第一个, 它谈论鬼神和我喜欢这些主题。

First, it talks about ghosts and gods and I like these themes.

Grimm


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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