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Kist

June 26, 2022

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Greetings

Hello everyone, this is my first journal. I found this website through a speaking partner in the Meeting app. He shared it and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for. I was trying to find a website where I could post my thoughts and ideas and others can help me. My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary and correct my grammar. I have problem trying to connect the sentences and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself. However any correction it is welcome.

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Greetings

Hello everyone, this is my first journal.

I found this website through a speaking partner in the Meeting app.

He shared it and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for.

I was trying to find a website where I could post my thoughts and ideas and others canould help me.

You want to use the conditional “could” both times in this sentence.

My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary and correct my grammar.

I have ptroublem trying to connect the sentences and. I do non’t need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself more like a native speaker.

In place of “I have problem trying “, you could say “I have difficulty” or “I have problems” or “I have trouble”, but you wouldn’t use the singular “problem”. I split your sentence into two for stylistic clarity. “learn native ways” sounds unnatural in this context, I provided an alternative which will be understood more clearly.

However any correction it is welcome.

You don’t need the “it” in this sentence.

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I nit-picked a few details of style and grammar, but everything you wrote would be perfectly understandable to a native English speaker.

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Kist

July 1, 2022

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I have ptroublem trying to connect the sentences and. I do non’t need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself more like a native speaker.

That’s what I want, thank you so much.

He shared it, and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for.

Use a comma in combination with "and" to separate two independent clauses. This site goes into some more detail: https://lifehacker.com/remember-the-fanboys-rule-for-proper-comma-usage-1755944556

I have problemdifficulty trying to connect the sentences, and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.

I would try to avoid combining 3 or more sentences using conjunctions. It's easier to read when you split them up in separate sentences. I would rewrite the sentence like this:

"I have difficulty trying to connect the sentences. However, I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself."

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Your writing is really good. There really isn't anything unnatural sounding in it.

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Kist

July 1, 2022

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I have problemdifficulty trying to connect the sentences, and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.

I appreciate your review!

Greetings

Hello everyone, this is my first journal.

I found this website through a speaking partner in the Meeting app.

He shared it and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for.

I was trying to find a website where I could post my thoughts and ideas and others can help me.

My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary, and correct my grammar.

A comma is generally after everything in a list before the final "and".

I have problems trying to connect the sentences and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.

However, any correction it is welcome.

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Kist

June 26, 2022

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My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary, and correct my grammar.

So, the comma after the word vocabulary should not be there?

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stevetoolman

June 26, 2022

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So, the comma after the word vocabulary should not be there?

I just looked it up and it looks like either way is fine.

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Kist

June 26, 2022

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I just looked it up and it looks like either way is fine.

That is great to know. Thank you.

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diggn

June 26, 2022

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So, the comma after the word vocabulary should not be there?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ptM7FzyjtRk. ;)

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Hello everyone, this is my first journal.


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I found this website through a speaking partner in the Meeting app.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He shared it and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He shared it, and I thought it was exactly what I was looking for.

Use a comma in combination with "and" to separate two independent clauses. This site goes into some more detail: https://lifehacker.com/remember-the-fanboys-rule-for-proper-comma-usage-1755944556

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was trying to find a website where I could post my thoughts and ideas and others can help me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was trying to find a website where I could post my thoughts and ideas and others canould help me.

You want to use the conditional “could” both times in this sentence.

My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary and correct my grammar.


My personal goal is to learn how to write better, find new vocabulary, and correct my grammar.

A comma is generally after everything in a list before the final "and".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have problem trying to connect the sentences and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.


I have problems trying to connect the sentences and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.

I have problemdifficulty trying to connect the sentences, and I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself.

I would try to avoid combining 3 or more sentences using conjunctions. It's easier to read when you split them up in separate sentences. I would rewrite the sentence like this: "I have difficulty trying to connect the sentences. However, I do not need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself."

I have ptroublem trying to connect the sentences and. I do non’t need to learn how to write perfectly, but I would like to learn native ways to express myself more like a native speaker.

In place of “I have problem trying “, you could say “I have difficulty” or “I have problems” or “I have trouble”, but you wouldn’t use the singular “problem”. I split your sentence into two for stylistic clarity. “learn native ways” sounds unnatural in this context, I provided an alternative which will be understood more clearly.

However any correction it is welcome.


However, any correction it is welcome.

However any correction it is welcome.

You don’t need the “it” in this sentence.

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