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hicran

Feb. 5, 2021

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gratefulness

When i read this title, i had nothing to come up with and i immediately understood that i am not grateful enough for what i have. Girl, you have to be happy, because you have everything for it: lovely family, true friends, a roof over your head, enough food and etc. Many people all over the world are out of everything that i've mentioned. But as i've said, i can't appreciate fully what i have and this makes me extremely miserable. It feels like the thick fog surrounds me and i can't see that i'm okay and everything around me is okay.

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When iI read this title, iI had nothing to come up with and i. I immediately understood that iI am not grateful enough for what iI have.

Be sure to capitalize "I" here!

Girl, you have to be happy, because you have everything for it: lovelyit all: a loving family, true friends, a roof over your head, enough food and, etc.

You may also end a sentence with "... and more" to show that there is more that you can describe.

Many people all over the world are out oflack everything that iI've mentioned.

But as ilike I've said, iI can't really appreciate fully what iI have, and thisat makes me extremely miserable.

It feels like there is thick fog surrounds me and iing me. I can't see that iI'm okay and everything around me is okay.

gratefulness


When i read this title, i had nothing to come up with and i immediately understood that i am not grateful enough for what i have.


When iI read this title, iI had nothing to come up with and i. I immediately understood that iI am not grateful enough for what iI have.

Be sure to capitalize "I" here!

Girl, you have to be happy, because you have everything for it: lovely family, true friends, a roof over your head, enough food and etc.


Girl, you have to be happy, because you have everything for it: lovelyit all: a loving family, true friends, a roof over your head, enough food and, etc.

You may also end a sentence with "... and more" to show that there is more that you can describe.

Many people all over the world are out of everything that i've mentioned.


Many people all over the world are out oflack everything that iI've mentioned.

But as i've said, i can't appreciate fully what i have and this makes me extremely miserable.


But as ilike I've said, iI can't really appreciate fully what iI have, and thisat makes me extremely miserable.

It feels like the thick fog surrounds me and i can't see that i'm okay and everything around me is okay.


It feels like there is thick fog surrounds me and iing me. I can't see that iI'm okay and everything around me is okay.

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