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Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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Granddaughter

The picture was shot on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.
One day, I asked her if she had ever missed grandpa. She said, "No." She is an honest girl.

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Granddaughter

The picture was shot this September on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.

What you have is not incorrect. This just seems more natural to me.

She said, "No."

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Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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Thank you for your correction, I am really appreciate it.

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Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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Thank you for your corrections, I really appreciate it.

Grandfather


The picture was shot on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.


The picture was shot this September on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.

What you have is not incorrect. This just seems more natural to me.

One day, I asked her if she had ever missed grandpa.


She said, "No."


She said, "No."

She is an honest girl.


Granddaughter


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