Sept. 8, 2021
Grand Blue - Chapter 71 - Summary
Busujima is with a hangover and Iori helps her. Then they go to his house for bitching about work but what she really wants is to get laid with Iori. Iori is constantly interrupted first by her cousin Chisa and then by her sister; and finaly by his friend who holed the condoms. Finaly she sleeps in his room hoping that Iori atacks but he doesnt do anything.
This chapter ends with Iori goint to shower and Busujima saying that she thought than she have him this time.
Busujima esta con resaca y Iori la ayuda. Después van a su casa para quejarse del trabajo pero lo que realmente quiere es hacerlo con Iori. Iori es constantemente interrumpido, primero por su prima Chisa y después por su hermana, y finalmente por sus amigos que le hicieron hueco a los condones.
Finalmente, ella duerme en su cuarto de él esperando que Iori la ataque pero el no hace nada.
El capítulo acaba con Iori yendo al baño y Busujima diciendo que pensó que lo tenía esta vez.
Grand Blue - Chapter 71 - Summary
Busujima is with ahas hangover and Iori helps her out.
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Iori is constantly interrupted f. First by her cousin Chisa and, then by her sister; and finally by hiIori's friend, who holed thepoked holes in his condoms.
Finalyly, she sleeps with him in his room, hoping that Iori awill attacks, but he doesn't do anything.
Unsure if you meant that she fell asleep, or that she was in his bed, awake. Also, not sure what you mean by "attack."
This chapter ends with Iori gointg to shower, and Busujima saying that she thought than she haveshe would have had him this time.
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Sept. 9, 2021
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Busujima is with a hangover and Iori helps her. Busujima |
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Then they go to his house for bitching about work but what she really wants is to get laid with Iori. Then, they go to "Get laid" can't take an object usually. |
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Iori is constantly interrupted first by her cousin Chisa and then by her sister; and finaly by his friend who holed the condoms. Iori is constantly interrupted |
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Finaly she sleeps in his room hoping that Iori atacks but he doesnt do anything. Final Unsure if you meant that she fell asleep, or that she was in his bed, awake. Also, not sure what you mean by "attack." |
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This chapter ends with Iori goint to shower and Busujima saying that she thought than she have him this time. This chapter ends with Iori goin |
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