March 17, 2023
Grammar Practice 2
I'd like to speak English naturally, not sound like a textbook, so please teach me strictly so that I can speak like a native speaker!🙇♂️
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Grammar Practice 2
am, is are (questions)
Are you free to hang out tomorrow?
Yes, I'm free! Let's!!
（明日は遊ぶ暇ある？）
Is it cold in your room?
Yeah. I have been trying to save electricity. So I haven't turned on a AC last year and this year yet.
Those shoes are nice!(/ Nice sneaker!) How much are they?
I forgot. Maybe $300 or so?
They're expensive. You're rich.
No. I just buy things with the intention of selling them after I use them. They're expensive, but at the same time, I can sell them for more than normal. If the value goes down by $100, it's still normal, if I think of it as I bought the shoes with that money.
How was that hotel?
It was good! But there were more and more guests with children, and I couldn't relax, so I had decided not to go there. Besides, it's more fun to make new discoveries.
Hey, can you tell me what time it is?
Sure. Well, it's 1:20 p.m.
Oh, it was already past noon? Have you had lunch?
Yes.
Oh... So have you had dinner?
No. haha
So could I take you for a meal?
No.
Haha okay. Thanks.
How old are your birds?
The left will be 4 this year. The right will be 2. We also had birds before and they were 7, 5 and 2.
What happened to the 2 year old birdie?
It was an accident. When my mother tried to sit down, the baby ran and came under her buttocks and crushed by her. She was
crying all day. I've learned to pay attention carefully when I walk too.
事故だったよ。母が座ろうとしたら、その鳥ちゃんは走ってお尻の下にきちゃって潰されたんだ。母は一日中泣いてたよ。歩く時も注意を払うことを学んだよ。
Grammar Practice 2
I'd like to speak English naturally, not sound and not like a textbook, so please teach me strictlyas accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native speaker!🙇♂️
はい！分かりました！
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Grammar Practice 2
am, is are (questions)
Are you free to hang out tomorrow?
Let's do something!!
また、
- Where do you want to go?
- What do you want to do?
Is it cold in your room?
Yeah.
I have been trying to save electricity.
So I havedidn't turned on athe AC last year andnor this year yet.
Those shoes are nice!
(/ Nice sneakers!) How much are they?
We usually refer to shoes, sneakers and boots in their plural form. We use the singular form when we're looking at one shoe, for example.
I forgot.
Maybe $300 or so?
They're expensive.
You're rich.
No.
I just buy things with the intention of selling them after I use them.
They're expensive, but at the same time, I can sell them for more than normal.
If the value goes down by $100, it'this is still normal, if I think of it as I boughtbuying the shoes with that money.
ちょっと分かりにくいと思います。日本語でもいいです。
How was that hotel?
It was good!
But there were more and more guestspeople with children, and I couldn't relax, so I had decided not to go there any more.
Besides, it's more fun to maksee new discoveriethings.
Hey, can you tell me what time it is?
Sure.
Well, it's 1:20 p.m.
Oh, it wa's already past noon?
Have you had lunch?
Yes.
Oh...
So have you had dinner?
No.
haha
So couldan I take you out for a meal?
Grammatically correct version: "So may I take you out for a meal?"
No.
Haha, okay.
Thanks.
How old are your birds?
The one on the left will be 4 this year.
The one on the right will be 2.
We've also had birds before and they were 7, 5 and 2.
What happened to the 2 year old birdie?
ItThere was an accident.
When my mother tried to sit down, the baby ran and came under her buttocks and crushed by herflew under her and got crushed.
She was
She was crying all day.
I've learned to pay attention carefully when I walk, too.
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よく書けています！
March 20, 2023
If the value goes down by $100, it'this is still normal, if I think of it as I boughtbuying the shoes with that money.
確かに分かりにくかったと思いますので、少し文を変えてみました！
これではどうでしょうか？
良い靴だね！いくらくらいした？
忘れちゃった。300ドルくらい？
高い！金持ちだね！
違うよ、売るときも考慮して買ってるんだよ。これは高いかもしれないけど、でも高く売れるからさ。結局高く売っちゃえばそんなに高い買い物してることにはならないからね。
Nice shoes! How much are they?
I don't remember, maybe $300 or so?
They're expensive. You're rich.
No, I mostly buy things with the intention of selling them after I use. They're expensive, but I can sell them for a lot. If I sell them at a high price, it's not that expensive.
March 20, 2023
わかりました。一つの添削です。
→ No, I mostly buy things with the intention of selling them after I use *them*.
よく書けています！
March 20, 2023
わかりました。一つの添削です。 → No, I mostly buy things with the intention of selling them after I use *them*. よく書けています！
ありがとうございます！！勉強になります！！🙇♂️
Grammar Practice 2
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not sound like a textbook, so please teach me strictlybe strict when correcting me so (that) I can speak like a native speaker!🙇♂️
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!
Grammar Practice 2
am, is are (questions)
Are you free to hang out tomorrow?
Let's!!
This isn't really needed. You can just say "Yes, I'm free to hang out!"
（明日は遊ぶ暇ある？）
Is it cold in your room?
Yeah.
I have been trying to save electricity.
So I haven't turned on athe AC last year and thissince last year yet.
Those shoes are nice!
(/ Nice sneaker!) How much are they?
I forgot.
Maybe $300 or so?
They're expensive.
You're rich.
No.
I just buy things with the intention of selling them after I use them.
They're expensive, but at the same time, I can sell them for more than normal.
If the value goes down by $100, ithat's justill normal, if I think of it as I bought the shoes with that money.
This setence doesn't really make sense and I'm not sure what you're trying to say here
How was that hotel?
It was good!
But there were more and moreso many guests with children, and I couldn't relax, so I had decided not to go there.
Besides, it's more fun to make new discoveries.
or "to discover more things"
Hey, can you tell me what time it is?
Sure.
Well, it's 1:20 p.m.
Oh, it wa's already past noon?
Have you had lunch?
Yes.
Oh...
So have you had dinner?
No.
haha
So could I take you for a meal?
No.
Haha okay.
Thanks.
How old are your birds?
The left will be 4 this year.
The right will be 2.
We also had birds before and they were 7, 5 and 2.
What happened to the 2 year old birdie?
It was an accident.
When my mother tried to sit down, the baby ran and camewent under her buttocks and got crushed by her.
She was
crying all day.
I've learned to pay attention carefully when I walk too.
事故だったよ。母が座ろうとしたら、その鳥ちゃんは走ってお尻の下にきちゃって潰されたんだ。母は一日中泣いてたよ。歩く時も注意を払うことを学んだよ。
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Great writing!! :)
March 20, 2023
If the value goes down by $100, ithat's justill normal, if I think of it as I bought the shoes with that money.
I think it was a little confusing, so I changed the sentence a little. How about this?
Those shoes are nice!(/ Nice sneakers!) How much are they?
I don't remember, maybe $300 or so?
They're expensive. You're rich.
No, I mostly buy things with the intention of selling them after I use. They're expensive, but I can sell them for a lot. If I sell them at a high price, it's not that expensive.
March 20, 2023
That does make more sense now, well done :)
March 21, 2023
That does make more sense now, well done :)
Thank you so much!!!🙇♂️
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