Oct. 31, 2022
I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitly one of the most important people in my life. We share with each other not only living space and free time, but also parenthood.
He does a lot for our family: buys food and boots, visits parents` evenings at school, takes the kids to the emergency room. The last two I can`t do, it`s too stressful for me. All these things should be done quite often because we have a daughter and two sons.
I love that my husband has different hobbys. From time to time he changes a kind of sport he does or a sort of books he reads, so he is always inspired by something new. Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quiet good in it.
And he always has respekt to my favorite things or activities. He supported me when I started to learn German seven years ago. And now I`m a german teacher.
When I got married, I had no idea about family life. Now I`m sure it`s wonderful to have a partner. We are never bored together.
We share with each other not only living space and free time with each other, but also parenthoodal responsibilities.
We share not only living space and free time with each other, but also parental responsibilities.
He does a lot for our family:, such as buysing food and boots, visitsattending parents` evenings (conferences?) at school, takesand taking the kids to the emergency room (if needed).
He does a lot for our family, such as buying food and boots, attending parents` evenings (conferences?) at school, and taking the kids to the emergency room (if needed).
The last two I can`t do, it`sI can't do the last two things as they are too stressful for me.
I can't do the last two things as they are too stressful for me.
I love the fact that my husband has different hobbyies.
I love the fact that my husband has different hobbies.
From time to time, he changes a kind of sport he does or a sortvaries his sporting activities or the genre of books that he reads, so he is always inspired by something new.
From time to time, he varies his sporting activities or the genre of books that he reads, so he is always inspired by something new.
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quiete good in it.
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quite good in it.
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And hHe always has respekt to my favorite thingcts my interests or activities.
He always respects my interests or activities.
And nNow, I`'m a gGerman teacher.
Now, I'm a German teacher.
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I love that my husband has different hobbyies.
I love that my husband has different hobbies.
From time to time he changes a kindthe type of sport he does or a sortthe types of books he reads, so he is always inspired by something new.
From time to time he changes the type of sport he does or the types of books he reads, so he is always inspired by something new.
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quiete good in it.
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quite good in it.
And he always has respekct tofor my favorite things or activities.
And he always has respect for my favorite things or activities.
I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitely one of the most important people in my life. I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitely one of the most important people in my life.
We share with each other not only living space and free time, but also parenthoodour living space and spend our free time together, and also have had children.
We share our living space and spend our free time together, and also have had children.
He does a lot for our family: buys food and boots, visits parents` evenings at school, and takes the kids to the emergency room.
He does a lot for our family: buys food and boots, visits parents` evenings at school and takes the kids to the emergency room.
Boots, specifically? As in the kind of shoes?
The last two I can`t do, it`sI can`t do the last two because they're too stressful for me.
I can`t do the last two because they're too stressful for me.
AllWe do these things should be done quite often because we have a daughter and two sons.
We do these things often because we have a daughter and two sons.
Your children go to the emergency room often? That's what's implied by your journal so far. The phrasing of "All these things should be done quite often" makes it seem like it's a general suggestion for lots of different families.
I love that my husband has different hobbyies.
I love that my husband has different hobbies.
From time to time, he changes a kind of sport he does or a sort of books he reads, sotries a different sport or new books; he is always inspired by something newdifferent.
From time to time, he tries a different sport or new books; he is always inspired by something different.
Now he preferHe enjoys medieval fencing now and is quiete good inat it.
He enjoys medieval fencing now and is quite good at it.
And hHe always has respekt tocts my favorite things or activithobbies.
He always respects my favorite hobbies.
And nNow I`m a german teacher.
Now I`m a german teacher.
It's frowned upon in formal English to use coordinating conjunctions like "and" and "but"at the start of a sentence,
When I got married, I had no idea about what family life would be like. When I got married, I had no idea about what family life would be like.
Now I`m sure think it`'s wonderful to have a partner.
Now I think it's wonderful to have a partner.
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I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitly one of the most important people in my life. I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitely one of the most important people in my life. I`d like to write about my husband because he is definitely one of the most important people in my life. |
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We share with each other not only living space and free time, but also parenthood.
We share
We share |
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He does a lot for our family: buys food and boots, visits parents` evenings at school, takes the kids to the emergency room.
He does a lot for our family: buys food and boots, visits parents` evenings at school Boots, specifically? As in the kind of shoes?
He does a lot for our family |
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The last two I can`t do, it`s too stressful for me.
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All these things should be done quite often because we have a daughter and two sons.
Your children go to the emergency room often? That's what's implied by your journal so far. The phrasing of "All these things should be done quite often" makes it seem like it's a general suggestion for lots of different families. |
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I love that my husband has different hobbys.
I love that my husband has different hobb
I love that my husband has different hobb
I love the fact that my husband has different hobb |
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From time to time he changes a kind of sport he does or a sort of books he reads, so he is always inspired by something new.
From time to time, he
From time to time he changes
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Now he prefers medieval fencing and is quiet good in it.
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is qui
Now he prefers medieval fencing and is qui quiet—тихий , quite—довольно |
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And he always has respekt to my favorite things or activities.
And he always has respe
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He supported me when I started to learn German seven years ago. |
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And now I`m a german teacher.
It's frowned upon in formal English to use coordinating conjunctions like "and" and "but"at the start of a sentence,
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When I got married, I had no idea about family life. When I got married, I had no idea about what family life would be like. When I got married, I had no idea about what family life would be like. |
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Now I`m sure it`s wonderful to have a partner.
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We are never bored together. |
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