Dec. 1, 2020
Graduation: Change of Plans
Yesterday, the school's administration sent a message in which they told students that the protocol for graduations has changed. It turns out that I will be able to graduate with all of my classmates because the school is allowed to host event with more people than it was allowed before. I'm so happy I get to graduate with my best friends! Now I know that day will be special for sure. It wouldn't be the same without them.
However, I'm angry towards some of my classmates. A reduced group of people (about a half of my classmates) have been planning to hang out after the graduation. Their intentions are doing the planning themselves and then telling the rest of the class. But no one asked them to do it. They are excluding the people they don't like from the decision making. That's so wrong! Things like this have already divided us in the past, and makes me strongly dislike my classmates. I'm definitely not going to do what they suggest.
A friend of mine is in that group and it really bothers me. She hasn't told me or my best friend a thing because she knows it's wrong. She doesn't tell us so that we don't complain about it. We found out anyway, but we don't want to say anything to her to avoid conflict.
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Now I know that day will be special for sure.
It wouldn't be the same without them.
However, I'm angry towards some of my classmates.
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Their intentions are doing is to do the planning themselves and then telling the rest of the class, but ....
But.... no one asked them to do it.
They are excluding the people they don't like from the decision making.
That's so wrong!
Things like this have already divided us in the past, and makes me strongly dislike mythese classmates.
I'm definitely not going to do what they suggest.
A friend of mine is in that group and it really bothers me.
She hasn't told me or my best friend a thing because she knows it's wrong.
She doesn't tell us so that we wouldon't complain about it.
We found out anyway, but we don't want to say anything to her to avoid conflict.
Graduation: Change of Plans
Yesterday, the school's administration sent a message in which they told students that the policy|protocol for graduations[s] has changed.
It turns out that I will be able to graduate with all of my classmates because the school is allowed to host events with more people than it waswere allowed before.
I'm so happy I get to graduate with my best friends!
Now I know that day will be special for sure.
It wouldn't be the same without them.
However, I'm angry at|towards some of my classmates.
A reduced group of people (about a half of my classmates) have been planning to hang out together after the graduation.
Their intentions are doing is to do the planning themselves and then telling the rest of the class.
But no one asked them to do it.
They are excluding the people they don't like from the decision making.
That's so wrong!
Things like this have already divided us in the past, and makes me strongly dislike my classmates.
I'm definitely not going to do what they suggest.
A friend of mine is in that group and it really bothers me.
She hasn't told me or my best friend a thing because she knows it's wrong.
She doesn't tell us so that we don't complain about it.
We found out anyway, but we don't want to say anything to her to avoid conflict.
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Dec. 2, 2020
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