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mrfriendly

Aug. 11, 2021

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I will be attending grad school!

I am planning to attend grad school in Korea, where I will major in Business analytics, from this fall. This summer, I applied to a research lab that studies deep learning application to financial field and was accepted. I started working in the lab that is an hour away from my home since two weeks ago although the classes have not resumed yet.

This lab has many members - almost 20. It a far larger size compared to other labs in this school.

I have to sit in front of a microwave because the office lacks space, but I still have a big desk on my own, and I can use this brand new computer with high capacity GPU device. I even have 3 monitors.:)

Students seem to be nice and smart. I enjoy talking to them, although they are on average 4 years younger than me.

Last weekend, the professor asked me to proofread a work written by a student. While I feel that I'm still not even close to the 'Native proficient' level, it is true that I have spent 7 long years in the US and I'm supposed to be 'semi-native.' Also it is true that my English writing skill has improved since college after practicing to write essays every few weeks.

Anyway, professor was quite satisfied with my proofreading, and I was happy, too, although she was going to give it to a professional proofreader again.

I feel like I really need to brush up my math skills to really excel in this field. I will try hard and cross my fingers to it.

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I will be attending grad school!

I am planning to attend grad school in Korea, where this fall. I will major in Bbusiness analytics, from this fall.

This summer, I applied and was accepted to a research lab that studies deep learning application to financial field and was accepted.

Although classes have not resumed yet, I started working in the lab thawo weeks ago. It is an hour away from my home since two weeks ago although the classes have not resumed yet.

This lab has many members - almost 20.

Can use either em dash or colon here.

It a far larger size compared tois much bigger than the other labs in this school.

I have to sit in front of a microwave because the office lacks space, but I still. Even so, I have a big desk ton my own, and I canself and get to use thisa brand new computer with high capacity GPU devicea powerful graphics card.

I even have 3 monitors to work with.

:)

SThe students seem to be nice and smart.

I enjoy talking to them, aAlthough they are on averageabout 4 years younger than me, I still enjoy talking to them.

Last weekend, the professor asked me to proofread a work written by a student.

While I feel that I'm still not even close to the 'Native proficient' level, it is true that I have spent 7 long years in the US and I'am supposed to be '"semi-native," I feel that I'm not even close to the "native proficient" level.'

Single quotes only used when they are within quotes, normally double quotes are used.

Also it is true thatThat said, my English writing skill has improved since college after practicing toa lot from writeing essays every few weeks in college.

The wording is unclear, not sure if you mean you wrote essays during or after.

Anyway,In the end, I was happy with what I came up with. The professor was quite satisfied with my proofreading, and I was happy, too, although she was going to givesend it to a professional proofreader againto look over.

I feel like I really need to brush up my math skills to really excel in this field.

I will try hard and crosskeep my fingers to itcrossed.

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Good job! Most of my corrections are just tweaks to make the phrasing more natural.

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mrfriendly

Aug. 11, 2021

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Thanks so much!! <3

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I am planning to attend grad school in Korea, where I will major in Business analytics, from this fall.


I am planning to attend grad school in Korea, where this fall. I will major in Bbusiness analytics, from this fall.

This summer, I applied to a research lab that studies deep learning application to financial field and was accepted.


This summer, I applied and was accepted to a research lab that studies deep learning application to financial field and was accepted.

I started working in the lab that is an hour away from my home since two weeks ago.


This lab has many members - almost 20 .


It a far larger size compared to other labs in this school .


I was very excited because I could use this brand new computer with high capacity GPU device.


I even have 3 monitors.


I even have 3 monitors to work with.

:)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People seem to be nice, and smart.


I enjoy talking to them, although they are on average 4 years younger than me.


I enjoy talking to them, aAlthough they are on averageabout 4 years younger than me, I still enjoy talking to them.

Last weekend, the professor asked me to proofread a work written by a student.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

While I feel that I'm still not at the 'Native proficient' level, it is true that I have spent 7 long years in the US and I'm supposed to be 'semi-native.'


Also it is true that my English writing skill has improved since college after practicing to write essays every few weeks.


Also it is true thatThat said, my English writing skill has improved since college after practicing toa lot from writeing essays every few weeks in college.

The wording is unclear, not sure if you mean you wrote essays during or after.

Anyway, professor was quite satisfied with my proofreading, and I was happy, too.


I feel like I really need to brush up my math skills to really excel in this field.


I feel like I really need to brush up my math skills to really excel in this field.

I will try hard and cross my fingers.


This lab has many members - almost 20.


This lab has many members - almost 20.

Can use either em dash or colon here.

It a far larger size compared to other labs in this school.


It a far larger size compared tois much bigger than the other labs in this school.

Students seem to be nice and smart.


SThe students seem to be nice and smart.

I will try hard and cross my fingers to it.


I will try hard and crosskeep my fingers to itcrossed.

I have to sit in front of a microwave because the office lacks space, but I still have a big desk on my own, and I can use this brand new computer with high capacity GPU device.


I have to sit in front of a microwave because the office lacks space, but I still. Even so, I have a big desk ton my own, and I canself and get to use thisa brand new computer with high capacity GPU devicea powerful graphics card.

Anyway, professor was quite satisfied with my proofreading, and I was happy, too, although she was going to give it to a professional proofreader again.


Anyway,In the end, I was happy with what I came up with. The professor was quite satisfied with my proofreading, and I was happy, too, although she was going to givesend it to a professional proofreader againto look over.

While I feel that I'm still not even close to the 'Native proficient' level, it is true that I have spent 7 long years in the US and I'm supposed to be 'semi-native.'


While I feel that I'm still not even close to the 'Native proficient' level, it is true that I have spent 7 long years in the US and I'am supposed to be '"semi-native," I feel that I'm not even close to the "native proficient" level.'

Single quotes only used when they are within quotes, normally double quotes are used.

I started working in the lab that is an hour away from my home since two weeks ago although the classes have not resumed yet.


Although classes have not resumed yet, I started working in the lab thawo weeks ago. It is an hour away from my home since two weeks ago although the classes have not resumed yet.

I will be attending grad school!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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