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June 30, 2023

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Cakes, breads and biscuits

I’ve just eaten a cake in the fridge. My mother bought it when she went shopping with her friends. The cake is simple. It is just a custard cake with some dried grapes and vanilla cream. But it brings me a lot of memories since I was a kid. There was one time, I really like this one. Every time my family go to the supermarket, I want to eat that cake when I feel tired to move.
But not only that, I’ve tried many cakes, and also breads and biscuits. In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combine with many foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce. I’ve tried to add some mutants but it’s kind of spicy more than I expected, so I removed it.
About biscuits, sometimes my parents received them from my uncle. Because they don’t like it, exactly they don’t want to eat it too much so mostly I and my sister always try to finish it before it is out of date. Now I’m scared a bit. I stopped eating biscuits for some days.
At that time, I found a bakery where my mother bought a birthday cake for me. “Birthday is not fun anymore as I grew up”, I’ve thought so. Until they kept the secret to me, they made me surprised by the cake. That cake had my favourite taste with another twinkling decoration. Not only that chocolate birthday cake, but a mini firework and a birthday hat also made a day that I cannot forget now. Although my friends didn’t come because of their hectic schedules, I had my best birthday ever.
After realising this, I used my pocket money to buy a small doughnut because I was on my way to school. The last one in that bakery was also the first time I eat the doughnut. It isn’t the best cake, but it helped me to make me happy that day at school.
Cakes are one of my most-liked foods. The sweetness and softness make me unable to hate it.

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Cakes, breads and biscuits

My mother bought it when she went shopping with her friends.

The cake is simple.

It is just a custard cake with some dried grapes and vanilla cream.

I stopped eating biscuits for some days.

After realising this, I used my pocket money to buy a small doughnut because I was on my way to school.

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leonard

July 1, 2023

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I’ve tried to add some mutants to it, but it’s kind ofa little more spicy more than I expected, so I removed it.

What do you mean by mutants?

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leonard

July 1, 2023

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Cakes, breads and biscuits

My mother bought it when she went shopping with her friends.

The cake is simple.

It is just a custard cake with some dried grapes and vanilla cream.

Although my friends didn’t come because of their hectic schedules, I had my best birthday ever.

After realising this, I used my pocket money to buy a small doughnut because I was on my way to school.

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leonard

July 1, 2023

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Cakes, breads and biscuits


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I’ve just eaten a cake in the fridge.


I’ve just eaten a cake infrom the fridge. I’ve just eaten a cake from the fridge.

I’ve just eaten a cake infrom the fridge. I’ve just eaten a cake from the fridge.

You could also say "I just ate a cake from the fridge" which sounds more natural.

My mother bought it when she went shopping with her friends.


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The cake is simple.


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It is just a custard cake with some dried grapes and vanilla cream.


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But it brings me a lot of memories since I was a kid.


But it brings me a lot of memories since I was a kifrom my childhood. But it brings me a lot of memories from my childhood.

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There was one time, I really like this one.


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Every time my family go to the supermarket, I want to eat that cake when I feel tired to move.


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But not only that, I’ve tried many cakes, and also breads and biscuits.


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In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combine with many foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce.


In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combined with manyother foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce. In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combined with other foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce.

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I’ve tried to add some mutants but it’s kind of spicy more than I expected, so I removed it.


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What do you mean by mutants?

About biscuits, sometimes my parents received them from my uncle.


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Because they don’t like it, exactly they don’t want to eat it too much so mostly I and my sister always try to finish it before it is out of date.


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I stopped eating biscuits for some days.


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At that time, I found a bakery where my mother bought a birthday cake for me.


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That cake had my favourite taste with another twinkling decoration.


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That cake had my favourite taste with anotherflavour and a twinkling decoration. That cake had my favourite flavour and a twinkling decoration.

Not only that chocolate birthday cake, but a mini firework and a birthday hat also made a day that I cannot forget now.


Not only thatwas it a chocolate birthday cake, but a mini firework and a birthday hat also made my birthday a day that I cannot forget now. Not only was it a chocolate birthday cake, but a mini firework and a birthday hat also made my birthday a day that I cannot forget now.

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Although my friends didn’t come because of their hectic schedules, I had my best birthday ever.


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After realising this, I used my pocket money to buy a small doughnut because I was on my way to school.


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The last one in that bakery was also the first time I eat the doughnut.


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It isn’t the best cake, but it helped me to make me happy that day at school.


It iwasn’t the best cake, but it helped me to make mefeel happy that day at school. It wasn’t the best cake, but it helped me feel happy that day at school.

Need to use the past tense.

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Cakes are one of my most-liked foods.


Cakes are one of my most-likedfavourite type of foods. Cakes are one of my favourite type of food.

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The sweetness and softness make me unable to hate it.


The sweetness and softness make me unable to hate it.s it irresistible. The sweetness and softness makes it irresistible.

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"Dislike" seems more fitting here.

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