today
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto. My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts.
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me.
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance. Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto have come to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster. They are serving free meals, and in the sweltering summer heat they are even handing out shaved ice to children. Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth.
Another story is just as touching. Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help. Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts.
Natural disasters bring immense suffering and loss. Yet they also reveal the very best of humanity. Those who were once helped return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next. Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope.
最近熊本で大きな地震が起こった。我が社も早速ボランティア活動に行っている。全国からボランティアの人たちが集まっているが、中でも感動したことがある。去年のお正月に能登で大地震が起こった際に、熊本から食料のボランティアに駆けつけてくれた御礼に今度は能登の方々が熊本に入りボランティア活動をしている。無償で食べ物を振舞っている。中でもくそ暑い中に子供たちがかき氷を食べて喜んでいる。また15年も前に起こった東北の津波の時も熊本からボランティア活動に来てくれたお礼として東北の人達がボランティア活動に来ている。そのような話を聞くと心が温まる。
Kumamoto Earthquake
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto.
My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts.
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me.
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance.
Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto have come to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
They are serving free meals, and in the sweltering summer heat they are even handing out shaved ice to children.
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth.
AHere's another story that is just as touching.
Here's another story that is just as touching.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts.
Natural disasters bring immense suffering and loss.
Yet they also reveal the very best of humanity.
Those who were onceonce received helped, return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next.
Those who once received help, return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next.
Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope.
Feedback
Well done! Thank you for sharing this. It's a nice reminder for me too, to have hope in humanity.
Kumamoto Earthquake
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto.
My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts.
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me.
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance.
Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto htrave comelled to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto travelled to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
Another story is just as touching.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Eearthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan earthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts.
Natural disasters bring immense suffering and loss.
Yet they also reveal the very best of humanity.
Those who were once helped return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next.
Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope.
Feedback
You write well ❤️👏🏾.
Stories like this makes me to have hope in humanity.
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto.
My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts.
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me.
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance.
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth./ really touches my heart/ warms my heart
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth/ really touches my heart/ warms my heart
I feel "warms my heart" is more natural. Nothing wrong with your original sentence but it feels a bit more robotic.
AThere's another story that is just as touching.
There's another story that is just as touching.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Yet, they also reveal the very best of humanity. Yet, they also reveal the very best of humanity.
Smaller grammar edit haha.
Those who were once helpedl those who once received help return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next. Those who were once helpedl those who once received help return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next.
Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope.
Feedback
感動しています。日本に祈ります〜
Kumamoto Earthquake
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto.
My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts.
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me.
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance.
Now, wishhoping to repay that kindness, people from Noto have come to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
Now, hoping to repay that kindness, people from Noto have come to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
You could also say "looking to repay that kindness"
They are servinge free meals, and in the sweltering summer heat they are even handing out shaved ice to children in the sweltering summer heat.
They serve free meals, even handing out shaved ice to children in the sweltering summer heat.
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth.
Another story is just as touching.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and tTsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and Tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
If the disaster's name is "Great East Japan Earthquake and Tsunami" then tsunami should also be capitalized
Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts. Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts.
Natural disasters bring immense suffering and loss.
Yet they also reveal the very best of humanity.
Those who were once helped return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next.
Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope.
Feedback
It really is beautiful to see communities come together to help each other.
|
Kumamoto Earthquake This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A major earthquake recently struck Kumamoto. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
My company quickly dispatched volunteers to the affected area to help with the relief efforts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Volunteers have gathered from all over Japan, but one story in particular deeply moved me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When the big earthquake struck the Noto Peninsula on New Year's Day last year, volunteers from Kumamoto traveled there to provide food and other forms of assistance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto have come to Kumamoto to help those affected by this disaster.
Now, You could also say "looking to repay that kindness"
Now, wishing to repay that kindness, people from Noto This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
They are serving free meals, and in the sweltering summer heat they are even handing out shaved ice to children.
They This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Just imagining the smiles on those children's faces as they enjoy a simple treat in such difficult circumstances fills my heart with warmth I feel "warms my heart" is more natural. Nothing wrong with your original sentence but it feels a bit more robotic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Another story is just as touching. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This sentence has been marked as perfect!
|
|
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and tsunami, many volunteers from Kumamoto traveled to the Tohoku region to help.
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan Earthquake and If the disaster's name is "Great East Japan Earthquake and Tsunami" then tsunami should also be capitalized This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Fifteen years ago, after the Great East Japan This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts. Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts. Remembering that generosity, people from Tohoku have now come to Kumamoto to take part in the relief efforts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Natural disasters bring immense suffering and loss. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Yet they also reveal the very best of humanity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Yet, they also reveal the very best of humanity. Yet, they also reveal the very best of humanity. Smaller grammar edit haha. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Those who were once helped return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Those who were once helpedl those who once received help return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next. Those who were once helpedl those who once received help return years later to help others in need, passing kindness from one generation of survivors to the next. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Those who |
|
Whenever I hear stories like these, I am reminded of the strength of human compassion, and my heart is filled with hope. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium