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夏威夷蛋糕
今天我做了夏威夷蛋糕。
因为配方是复杂，用2个小时。
首先百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕，终于做 糖霜。
然后放冰箱里几个小时。
我蛋糕吃等不及了！
Today I made Hawaiian cake.
Because it’s a complicated recipe, it took two hours.
First you make the passion fruit pudding, then the cake, and finally the frosting.
Then put it in the fridge for a few hours.
I can’t wait to eat it!
https://www.justapinch.com/recipes/dessert/cake/hawaiian-passionfruit-chiffon-cake.html
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夏威夷蛋糕
今天我做了夏威夷蛋糕。
因为配方是很复杂，用了2个小时。
因为配方很复杂，用了2个小时。
首先用百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕，终于做 最后做糖霜。
首先用百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕，最后做糖霜。
然后放冰箱里几个小时。
我蛋糕吃等不及吃蛋糕了！
我等不及吃蛋糕了！
夏威夷蛋糕
今天我做了夏威夷蛋糕。
因为配方是很复杂，用需要2个小时。
因为配方很复杂，需要2个小时。
Just make it sounds more clear.
首先做百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕，终于最后做 糖霜。
首先做百香果布丁，然后做蛋糕，最后做 糖霜。
We tend to put the verb in front of the verb. And it seemed so tasty… I'm hungry.
然后放冰箱里几个小时。
我蛋糕吃等不及吃蛋糕了！
我等不及吃蛋糕了！
“等不及” here is to modify the behavior, so it’s better to put it forward.
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Sounds delicious!!!!
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因为配方是复杂，用2个小时。
因为配方 Just make it sounds more clear.
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首先百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕，终于做 糖霜。
首先做百香果布丁 We tend to put the verb in front of the verb. And it seemed so tasty… I'm hungry.
首先用百香果布丁做，然后做蛋糕， |
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我蛋糕吃等不及了！
我 “等不及” here is to modify the behavior, so it’s better to put it forward.
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