Oct. 6, 2025
happiness , this is the deeply word that everyone try to get it .
in my opinion , the happiness is feeling that make me continue in my live , achieve my goals , reach to the top .it is not just a laughing and joy ,also it is feeling relax , through your stress away , feeling responsibility ,safety, and peace inside .
in all of small point in your live ,there is a huge source of happiness ,in your exhausted work , your falling relationship , complex time , every thing include happiness if you see to the full part in your cup .
السعادة ، هذه كلمة عميقة يحاول كل شخص الحصول عليها .
برأيي الشخصي السعادة شعور يجعلني أستمر في حياتي ، أحقق اهدافي ، أصل للقمة .هيو ليس فقط شعور فرح وضحك ايضاً هو شعور بالراحة ، أن تلقي توترك بعيداً ، شعور بالمسؤولية ،الأمان ، والسلام الداخلي .
في كل نقطة صغيرة في حياتك يوجد منبع ضخم من السعادة، في عملك المتعب ، علاقاتك الفاشلة ، وقتك المعقد ، كل شيء يحتوي سعادة اذا نظرت للجزء الممتلئ من كأسك .
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Hi,
Your description about the happiness was amazing.
I really liked it . And it really gives me a good feeling.
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Happiness
"Happiness" in general does not need "the."
"The happiness" signifies a specific happiness. For example, "the happiness I feel when I watch the sunset versus the happiness I feel when I watch the sunrise"
hHappiness , t. This is the deeplyone word that everyone tryies to get it understand.
Happiness. This is the one word that everyone tries to understand.
"Deeply" is an adverb, for an adjective you would use "deep." I suggest instead to use "the one" which is used for emphasis and works naturally here
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In my opinion, happiness is a feeling that makes me push forward in my life, to achieve my goals, to reach to the top. It is not just laughter and joy, but also feeling relaxed, throwing my stress away, feeling responsibility, safety, and peace inside.
"Continue" doesn't feel strong enough for this sentiment, I suggest "push through"
iIn all ofevery small point inarea of your live ,fe, there is a huge source of happiness ,i. In your exhausteding work , your faliling relationship , (complex?) time , every thing includes happiness if you see tolook at the full part inof your cup .
In every small area of your life, there is a huge source of happiness. In your exhausting work, your failing relationship, (complex?) time, everything includes happiness if you look at the full part of your cup.
I didn't know what you meant by "complex time," so I can't suggest an alternative
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Great job
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the happiness
"Happiness" in general does not need "the." "The happiness" signifies a specific happiness. For example, "the happiness I feel when I watch the sunset versus the happiness I feel when I watch the sunrise" |
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happiness , this is the deeply word that everyone try to get it .
"Deeply" is an adverb, for an adjective you would use "deep." I suggest instead to use "the one" which is used for emphasis and works naturally here |
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in my opinion , the happiness is feeling that make me continue in my live , achieve my goals , reach to the top .it is not just a laughing and joy ,also it is feeling relax , through your stress away , feeling responsibility ,safety, and peace inside .
"Continue" doesn't feel strong enough for this sentiment, I suggest "push through" |
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in all of small point in your live ,there is a huge source of happiness ,in your exhausted work , your falling relationship , complex time , every thing include happiness if you see to the full part in your cup .
I didn't know what you meant by "complex time," so I can't suggest an alternative |
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