Dec. 19, 2021
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Year 6 finished on the 18 of June. It was summer, the weather was hot and sunny. The year 6 school year started on the 7. of September but this school year(7) started on the 6. It doesn't always start and finish on the same date but it's always the same month. The most interesting thing about year 6 was that our class split, so now there is grade 6. a and 6. b I had 14 different subjets but the subjects that I had the most were math and Croatian at four hours a week. I usually had 6 lessons from 8 am to 1 pm. My favorite subject out of the 14 was IT because I love computers. The most important thing was that we had online school because of the coronavirus. All in all year 6 wasn't that bad but it could have been better. On the summer break, I went to the seaside with my family. There we went to the beach and Istralandia. For me, the summer break was good because a got a chance to relax.
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Year 6 finished on the 18th of June. Year 6 finished on the 18th of June.
It was summer, and the weather was hot and sunny.
It was summer and the weather was hot and sunny.
The yYear 6 school year started on the 7.th of September, but thise current school year( (Year 7) started on the 6th.
The Year 6 school year started on the 7th of September, but the current school year (Year 7) started on the 6th.
It doesn't always start and finish on the same date but it's always the same month.
The most interesting thing about yYear 6 was that our class was split, so now there is grade 6. a and 6. b. I had 14 different subjects but the subjects that I had the most were math and Croatian at four hours a week.
The most interesting thing about Year 6 was that our class was split, so now there is grade 6a and 6b. I had 14 different subjects but the subjects that I had the most were math and Croatian at four hours a week.
I usually had 6 lessons from 8 am to 1 pm.
My favorite subject out of the 14 was IT because I love computers.
All in all yYear 6 wasn't that bad but it could have been better.
All in all Year 6 wasn't that bad but it could have been better.
OnDuring the summer break, I went to the seaside with my family.
During the summer break, I went to the seaside with my family.
There we went to the beach and Istralandia.
For me, the summer break was good because aI got a chance to relax.
For me, the summer break was good because I got a chance to relax.
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Dec. 20, 2021
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Year 6 finished on the 18 of June. Year 6 finished on the 18th of June. Year 6 finished on the 18th of June. |
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It was summer, the weather was hot and sunny.
It was summer |
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The year 6 school year started on the 7. of September but this school year(7) started on the 6.
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It doesn't always start and finish on the same date but it's always the same month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most interesting thing about year 6 was that our class split, so now there is grade 6. a and 6. b I had 14 different subjets but the subjects that I had the most were math and Croatian at four hours a week.
The most interesting thing about |
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I usually had 6 lessons from 8 am to 1 pm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favorite subject out of the 14 was IT because I love computers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most important thing was that we had online school because of the coronavirus. |
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All in all year 6 wasn't that bad but it could have been better.
All in all |
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On the summer break, I went to the seaside with my family.
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There we went to the beach and Istralandia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, the summer break was good because a got a chance to relax.
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