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ayesha

Sept. 22, 2023

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Governments should place few restrictions on research

In this era of science, research plays important role in every filed of life. Scientific research leads the nations towards success. Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which were not exist and somewhere they were essential for human kind. Scientific research and development plays important roles in the modern society.
As for as research is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shape for new purposes. As the prompt said, Government should place few restrictions into the research areas. I totally disagree with it. In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a days. For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemical together. Most of the time, accidently, they mix-up wrong chemical which leds to destructions. For instance, the pandemic Covid-19 has already shown the fateful power of some viruses. Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent form producing harmful results.
Moreover, without restrictions, some researchers may use dirty ways to simplify their research. For example during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parts for their research as no one cared about their rights. These experiments carried out miserable state of prisoners. Thanks to modern restrictions on the research, it is commonplace that products like drugs are strictly prohibited for tests on humans unless they have been proven safe by multiple tests on animals.
The restrictions on the scientific research and development are so essential because there many institutions which are using harmful chemicals for research or generating new things for energy resources, such as Uranium. Uranium is such a harmful chemical because it is a radioactive element and it is uses in chemical reactors for producing energy. Government put restrictions on the supply of Uranium without sealing and checking the balancing of the product.
Some researchers may try to adulterate their outcomes for their own research. This can cause disastrous consequence if there is not enough supervision and restrictions. Such as , the researcher who have invent a nuclear reactor have cancelled all the security risks within it . The power plants are enormously dangerous. In order to prevent researchers form misconduct, there have been restricting s and supervises as well. In conclusion, scientific research should not conduct until there are enough restrictions and supervisions because without them we cannot prevent researchers from producing deadly results.

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Governments should place few restrictions on research

In this era of science, research plays important role in every fileld of life.

Scientific research leads the nations towards success.

Either
"Scientific research leads the nation toward success" if one country, or

"Scientific research leads nations toward success" if more than one country

Towards / toward are somewhat interchangeable depending on region

Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which weredid not exist and somewhere they werpreviously and some became essential for human kind.

I'm editorialising a little. I'm not sure what you meant by this sentence so I tried to make it sound like something I might say

Scientific research and development plays important roles in the modern society.

As for as rResearch is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shape for new purposes.

As the prompt said, Government should place few restrictions into theon research areas.

In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a days.

Nowadays - I guess. This is something that is said out loud but not really written.

For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemicals together.

This feels like half a sentence, I think it should join with the next sentence.

Most of the time, they accidently, theally mix-up the wrong chemicals which leads to destructionsamage / explosions / danger.

Destruction is more like - an entire city being destroyed, rather than a small event

For instance, the pandemic Covid-19 has already shown the fateful power of some viruses.

Don't need to specify pandemic

Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent forus from producing harmful results.

Moreover, without restrictions, some researchers may use dirty waytactics to simplify their research.

Dirty ways sounds strange

For example during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parttrials for their research as no one cared about their rights (the rights of the prisoners?).

I think this is what you mean?

In this era of science, research plays important role in every filedaspect of life.

You probably meant "field", which could work too.

Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which weredid not exist and somewhere they were essential for human kind.

As for as rResearch is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shapes for new purposes.

As the prompt said, Ggovernments should place few restrictions into the research areas.

or maybe "the government" ? You mention nations, so I assume it was plural.

I totally disagree with it.

In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a adays.

For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemicals together.

or you could phrase it as "For instance, when students are working in labs and they are mixing different chemicals together, they can make dangerous products."

Most of the time, accidently, they mix-up wrong chemical which leads to destructions.

"destruction" makes sense here, but "disaster" might fit better.

For instance, the pandemic Covid-19Covid-19 pandemic has already shown the fateful power of some viruses.

Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent form producing harmful results.

or "...prevent [us/people/scientists] from producing..."

Moreover, without restrictions, some researchers may use dirty ways to simplify their research.

For example, during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parts for their research as no one cared about their rights.

Correct here. Just wanted to add that I think by "human body parts" you might mean "vivisections"?

These experiments carried out miserable state of prisonersmade prisoners miserable.

Uranium is such a harmful chemical because it is a radioactive element and it is usesd in chemical reactors for producing energy.

This can cause disastrous consequence if there is not enough supervision and restrictions.

Such as For example, the researcher who have invented a nuclear reactor have cancelmight have revealed all the security risks within it .

I am not clear on the intended meaning.

The power plants are enormously dangerous.

In order to prevent researchers forom misconduct, there have been restrictiong s and supervisesion as well.

In conclusion, scientific research should not be conducted until there are enough restrictions and supervisions, because without them we cannot prevent researchers from producing deadly results.

ayesha's avatar
ayesha

Sept. 23, 2023

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Thank you for highlighting these mistakes.

For example during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parts for their research as no one cared about their rights.


For example, during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parts for their research as no one cared about their rights.

Correct here. Just wanted to add that I think by "human body parts" you might mean "vivisections"?

For example during the World War 2, Japanese scientists carried out numerous human body parttrials for their research as no one cared about their rights (the rights of the prisoners?).

I think this is what you mean?

These experiments carried out miserable state of prisoners.


These experiments carried out miserable state of prisonersmade prisoners miserable.

Thanks to modern restrictions on the research, it is commonplace that products like drugs are strictly prohibited for tests on humans unless they have been proven safe by multiple tests on animals.


Governments should place few restrictions on research


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this era of science, research plays important role in every filed of life.


In this era of science, research plays important role in every filedaspect of life.

You probably meant "field", which could work too.

In this era of science, research plays important role in every fileld of life.

Scientific research leads the nations towards success.


Scientific research leads the nations towards success.

Either "Scientific research leads the nation toward success" if one country, or "Scientific research leads nations toward success" if more than one country Towards / toward are somewhat interchangeable depending on region

Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which were not exist and somewhere they were essential for human kind.


Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which weredid not exist and somewhere they were essential for human kind.

Due to this research, many new things could happen in the world which weredid not exist and somewhere they werpreviously and some became essential for human kind.

I'm editorialising a little. I'm not sure what you meant by this sentence so I tried to make it sound like something I might say

Scientific research and development plays important roles in the modern society.


Scientific research and development plays important roles in the modern society.

As for as research is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shape for new purposes.


As for as rResearch is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shapes for new purposes.

As for as rResearch is essential for every nation because it can to build new ideas together into new shape for new purposes.

As the prompt said, Government should place few restrictions into the research areas.


As the prompt said, Ggovernments should place few restrictions into the research areas.

or maybe "the government" ? You mention nations, so I assume it was plural.

As the prompt said, Government should place few restrictions into theon research areas.

I totally disagree with it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a days.


In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a adays.

In my opinion, Government should place more restrictions because scientific research is far more dangerous now a days.

Nowadays - I guess. This is something that is said out loud but not really written.

For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemical together.


For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemicals together.

or you could phrase it as "For instance, when students are working in labs and they are mixing different chemicals together, they can make dangerous products."

For instance, when students are working into labs and they are mixing different chemicals together.

This feels like half a sentence, I think it should join with the next sentence.

Most of the time, accidently, they mix-up wrong chemical which leds to destructions.


Most of the time, accidently, they mix-up wrong chemical which leads to destructions.

"destruction" makes sense here, but "disaster" might fit better.

Most of the time, they accidently, theally mix-up the wrong chemicals which leads to destructionsamage / explosions / danger.

Destruction is more like - an entire city being destroyed, rather than a small event

For instance, the pandemic Covid-19 has already shown the fateful power of some viruses.


For instance, the pandemic Covid-19Covid-19 pandemic has already shown the fateful power of some viruses.

For instance, the pandemic Covid-19 has already shown the fateful power of some viruses.

Don't need to specify pandemic

Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent form producing harmful results.


Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent form producing harmful results.

or "...prevent [us/people/scientists] from producing..."

Therefore, there must be more restrictions on research and development to prevent forus from producing harmful results.

Moreover, without restrictions, some researchers may use dirty ways to simplify their research.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, without restrictions, some researchers may use dirty waytactics to simplify their research.

Dirty ways sounds strange

The restrictions on the scientific research and development are so essential because there many institutions which are using harmful chemicals for research or generating new things for energy resources, such as Uranium.


Uranium is such a harmful chemical because it is a radioactive element and it is uses in chemical reactors for producing energy.


Uranium is such a harmful chemical because it is a radioactive element and it is usesd in chemical reactors for producing energy.

Government put restrictions on the supply of Uranium without sealing and checking the balancing of the product.


Some researchers may try to adulterate their outcomes for their own research.


This can cause disastrous consequence if there is not enough supervision and restrictions.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Such as , the researcher who have invent a nuclear reactor have cancelled all the security risks within it .


Such as For example, the researcher who have invented a nuclear reactor have cancelmight have revealed all the security risks within it .

I am not clear on the intended meaning.

The power plants are enormously dangerous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In order to prevent researchers form misconduct, there have been restricting s and supervises as well.


In order to prevent researchers forom misconduct, there have been restrictiong s and supervisesion as well.

In conclusion, scientific research should not conduct until there are enough restrictions and supervisions because without them we cannot prevent researchers from producing deadly results.


In conclusion, scientific research should not be conducted until there are enough restrictions and supervisions, because without them we cannot prevent researchers from producing deadly results.

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