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Government Intervention in Business War
After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibit unfair business competition the next day. I doubt if the statement will completely prevent the upcoming business war. Because the government summoned relevant companies for talks over this issue last year, but it didn't work fundamentally. Let's see how it goes.
Government Intervention in Business War
After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibited unfair business competition the next day.
I doubt ifthat the statement will completely prevent the upcoming business war.
Because tThe government summoned relevant companies for talks over this issue last year, but it didn't work fundamentally.
Let's see how it goes.
After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibiting. unfair business competition the next day.
Changed “prohibit” → “prohibiting.”
I doubt ifthat the statement will completely prevent the upcoming business war.
“Doubt that” is more natural.
Because tThe government summoned relevant companies for talks overabout this issue last year, but it didn't work fundamentally.
Remove “Because” to avoid a fragment
Use “about” instead of “over.”
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After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibit unfair business competition the next day. After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibiting. unfair business competition the next day. Changed “prohibit” → “prohibiting.” After Alibaba declared their determination to become the leader in Local Life Service area, the municipal government issued a statement that prohibited unfair business competition the next day. |
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I doubt if the statement will completely prevent the upcoming business war. I doubt “Doubt that” is more natural. I doubt |
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Because the government summoned relevant companies for talks over this issue last year, but it didn't work fundamentally.
Remove “Because” to avoid a fragment Use “about” instead of “over.”
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Let's see how it goes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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