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serhan

yesterday

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Goverment's poin of view on refugees.

He is actually a puppet but his wires are pulled by Israel, USA and EU other than Türkiye. Israel has advanced towards Damascus at 60 km away remaining. He has done nothing aganist Israel's advance. It carried out many air strikes and seize Syria's soil. What action did al-Shara take? Nothing. He is now at the postion that he could not have dreamt. He knows that ıf he gets on well with Israel, USA and EU, he will not need Turkey down the road. Additionally, he does not care about the Syrian refugees in Turkey. He believes that the less population Syrian has, the easier it is for him to look after actual population.

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The Goverment's pPoint of vView on rRefugees.

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HeThe Turkish government is actually a puppet, but his wireits strings are pulled by Israel, the USA and EU other thanthe EU - not Türkiye.

From the text up to this point, I assumed the subject is the Turkish government. But if you mean an individual person, you should name them in place of "he." Otherwise, it's really not clear what you are talking about.

Puppets have "strings" rather than wires

Israel has advanced towards Damascus atwith 60 km awaydistance remaining.

HeThe government has done nothing aganinst Israel's advance.

Again, without a person being named, I am still assuming "the government" is the subject

ItThey have carried out many air strikes and seized Syria's soil.

"They" (plural) is rather referencing the group of people responsible in Israel

What action did al-Shara take?

Nothing.

He is now atin the position that he could not have dreamt of.

He knows that ıif he gets on well with Israel, the USA and the EU, he will not need Tuürkiyey down the road.

This is to agree with your earlier spelling

Additionally, he does not care about the Syrian refugees in Tuürkiyey.

He believes that the less population Syrian has, the easier it is for him to look after the actual population.

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Hi nefare, I think serhan was referring to the Syrian government since al-Shara/al-Julani is the current President of Syria

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serhan

yesterday

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Yes, I was ; Monsieur Elephant :)

Goverment's poin of view on refugees.


The Goverment's pPoint of vView on rRefugees.

Title formatting

He is actually a puppet but his wires are pulled by Israel, USA and EU other than Türkiye.


HeThe Turkish government is actually a puppet, but his wireits strings are pulled by Israel, the USA and EU other thanthe EU - not Türkiye.

From the text up to this point, I assumed the subject is the Turkish government. But if you mean an individual person, you should name them in place of "he." Otherwise, it's really not clear what you are talking about. Puppets have "strings" rather than wires

Israel has advanced towards Damascus at 60 km away remaining.


Israel has advanced towards Damascus atwith 60 km awaydistance remaining.

He has done nothing aganist Israel's advance.


HeThe government has done nothing aganinst Israel's advance.

Again, without a person being named, I am still assuming "the government" is the subject

It carried out many air strikes and seize Syria's soil.


ItThey have carried out many air strikes and seized Syria's soil.

"They" (plural) is rather referencing the group of people responsible in Israel

What action did al-Shara take?


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Nothing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He is now at the postion that he could not have dreamt.


He is now atin the position that he could not have dreamt of.

He knows that ıf he gets on well with Israel, USA and EU, he will not need Turkey down the road.


He knows that ıif he gets on well with Israel, the USA and the EU, he will not need Tuürkiyey down the road.

This is to agree with your earlier spelling

Additionally, he does not care about the Syrian refugees in Turkey.


Additionally, he does not care about the Syrian refugees in Tuürkiyey.

He believes that the less population Syrian has, the easier it is for him to look after actual population.


He believes that the less population Syrian has, the easier it is for him to look after the actual population.

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