I am Lisa, a goth a. All my clothes are black and I have piercedings and crazy Jjewellery how. Like a nose ring and armbands.

You need punctuation otherwise it sounds unnatural and a long sentence.

"Like" for listing items not "how".

They aren't so socially acceptable and have a negatives .

I wouldn't use "social" to describe an object, it's more natural to use "social" to describe a person. I would say "socially acceptable".

No need for indefinite article ("a") because "negatives" is plural.

They are judgemental about normal personople and are very independently.

So I assume you are talking about goths here.

You can't just say "they judgement", "judgement" is a noun. If you want to describe someone, you will require an adjective in this context (judgemental). Similar to "independent".

"People" to refer to everyone, the general public etc. "Person" is only talking about one person, it's unnatural to refer to just one person.

Goths are sometimes also only break person and fell oneself a bit uncertain.

When you want to generally talk about something, in this context goths, we refer to a plural form.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say here.

But they are also evil, rebellious and angry .

Don't forget commas.

My favourite music is rock and I play guitar and m. My favourite school subject is art .

usually we don't repeat "and" more than once in a sentence.

I make to fun graffityi and pictures.

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TheyGoths aren't so social and have a few negatives points.

They judgment aboute normal personople and are very independently.

Normal people judge Goths just as much, of not more )

Goths are sometimes also only break person and fell ones"broken" people and feelf a bit uncertaininsecure.

I put broken in quotes, as it's not literal. Also, everyone is broken in their own way

But they are also evildark, rebellious and angry .

Evil? Nah. All my goth friends were real nice.

When making a list, use commas!

My favourite music is rock and, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art .

I make to fundo graffityi and draw pictures for fun.

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I a'm Lisa, a goth all. All of my clothes are black and I have pierced andings, crazy Jewellery how, a nose ring and I wear armbands.

They aren't so social and have a negativIt's quite antisocial and has it's downsides .

That's how I'd write it.

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Goth are sometimes also only break person andoken people and simply felel oneself a bit uncertainunsure of themselves.

ButHowever they arecan also be evil, rebellious and angry .

Try to avoid starting a sentence with 'But'. I was taught not to in school! However/yet usually work instead.

My favourite genre of music is rock and, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art .

or 'and Art is my favourite subject at school.'

I make to funenjoy doing/making graffityi and painting pictures.

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Is this about judgement from normal people?

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But they arecan also be evil, rebellious andor angry .

My favourite music is rock and I play guitar and; my favourite school subject is art .

favorite is the British spelling, favorite is American

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