Oct. 6, 2021
Goodbye, Summer
It was very hot in the afternoon. I went swimming at half past seven at night, I felt a little cool and a little uncomfortable of my stomach. After simming 15 munites, I felt more uncomfortable. I still contitued because it would be my last swimming this year, I wanted to have a perfect ending. However, my body disagree with me and stopped me. TMD is a troublesome disease, and my symptom isn't heavy enough to have an surgery. What I can do is take good care of it, such as sleep well, talk less, don't chew tough food, ect.
Generally speaking, it is autumn in lunar month now, while I live in south China, it is still very hot in daytime. To me, the time when I can't swim means summer is gone.
Goodbye, summer.
Goodbye, Summer
It was very hot in thethis afternoon.
I went swimming at half past seven at night,. I felt a little coold, and a little uncomfortable of my stomachmy stomach was a little uneasy.
After swimming for 15 muniinutes, I felt even more uncomfortable.
I still contitnued, because it would be my last swimming this year, and I wanted to have a perfect ending to summer.
However, my body disagreed with me and stopped me.
TMD is a troublesome disease, and my symptom isn't heavys aren't serious enough to have warrant surgery.
What I can do is take good care of it, such asmyself by sleeping well, talking less, don'not chewing tough food, ectc.
Generally speaking, iIt is autumn in the lunar month now, whilecalendar now, though I live in south China, and it is still very hot in daytimduring the day here.
To me, the time when I can't swim meansif I can no longer swim, then summer ihas gone.
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It was very hot in the afternoon. It was very hot |
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I went swimming at half past seven at night, I felt a little cool and a little uncomfortable of my stomach. I went swimming at half past seven at night |
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After simming 15 munites, I felt more uncomfortable. After swimming for 15 m |
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I still contitued because it would be my last swimming this year, I wanted to have a perfect ending. I still conti |
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However, my body disagree with me and stopped me. However, my body disagreed with me and stopped me. |
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TMD is a troublesome disease, and my symptom isn't heavy enough to have an surgery. TMD is a troublesome disease, and my symptom |
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What I can do is take good care of it, such as sleep well, talk less, don't chew tough food, ect. What I can do is take good care of |
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Generally speaking, it is autumn in lunar month now, while I live in south China, it is still very hot in daytime.
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To me, the time when I can't swim means summer is gone. To me, |
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Goodbye, summer. |
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