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AikawaMizore

June 17, 2021

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After going out such as going shopping and dining out for long hours, I took a shower and I am refreshed now. I don't want to lose this good state. So closing PC, I have to sleep temporarily. Good night.

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Good state

After going out and doing things such as going shopping and dining out for a long hourstime, I took a shower and I am refreshed now.

I don't want to lose this good state.

So I'm closing my PC, I have to sleep temporarilyand I will take a nap.

You can't go to sleep temporarily.
"Go to sleep" means you sleep, how long you sleep doesn't matter. Usually you say it only for the 6 to 8 hour sleep you do every night though. It is like saying "I will temporarily go eat food." You cannot only temporarily eat food, you just eat however much you eat.

"take a nap" is the word for a short sleep that isn't the main sleep you do at the end of the day.

Good night.

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AikawaMizore

June 17, 2021

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My image of a nap is one for very short period of time, at the most 2 or 3 hours especially in the midday or early afternoon. In my language, we can say temporary sleep, and go to eat temporarily, so I am not convinced.

Thank you.

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After going out such as going shopping and dining out for long hours, I took a shower and I am refreshed now.


After going out and doing things such as going shopping and dining out for a long hourstime, I took a shower and I am refreshed now.

I don't want to lose this good state.


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So closing PC, I have to sleep temporarily.


So I'm closing my PC, I have to sleep temporarilyand I will take a nap.

You can't go to sleep temporarily. "Go to sleep" means you sleep, how long you sleep doesn't matter. Usually you say it only for the 6 to 8 hour sleep you do every night though. It is like saying "I will temporarily go eat food." You cannot only temporarily eat food, you just eat however much you eat. "take a nap" is the word for a short sleep that isn't the main sleep you do at the end of the day.

Good night.


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