Aug. 13, 2025
Good Routine
I'm starting to work out again after resting for a week. Yesterday was leg day, I'm planning to train the upper part of my body today.
Thanks to lowering my time in social media, I'm able to enjoy more rest and think more clearly.
I'm searching a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office.
What trade would you study and why?
Good Routine
I'm starting to work out again after resting for a week.
Yesterday was leg day, I'm planning to train the upper part of my body today.
more natural would be to say "my upper body" instead of "the upper part of my body"
Thanks to lowering my time ion social media, I'm able to enjoy more rest and think more clearly.
I'm searching for a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office.
"while" may not be the best choice here, as it would mean that you are going to be a blue-collar worker AND an office-worker at the same time.
What trade would you study and why?
Feedback
Nice job. I would say the main thing to consider revising is the "while" part above. I would want to become an automotive mechanic or a carpenter!
Good Routine
I'm starting to work out again after resting for a week.
Yesterday was leg day, I'm planning to train the upper part of my body today.
Thanks to lowering my time in social media, I'm able to enjoy more restSince I have reduced my screen time, I'm able to rest more and think more clearly.
I'm searching for a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office.
What trade would you study and why?
Feedback
Good writing! Just some changes to make the text flow better and sound more natural :))
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I'm starting to work out again after resting for a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday was leg day, I'm planning to train the upper part of my body today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Yesterday was leg day, I'm planning to train the upper part of my body today. more natural would be to say "my upper body" instead of "the upper part of my body" |
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Thanks to lowering my time in social media, I'm able to enjoy more rest and think more clearly.
Thanks to lowering my time |
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I'm searching a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office. I'm searching for a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office. I'm searching for a trade to study and practice for two years, because I'm planning to switch careers and become a blue-collar worker in three to five years while I'm working in the office. "while" may not be the best choice here, as it would mean that you are going to be a blue-collar worker AND an office-worker at the same time. |
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What trade would you study and why? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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