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michiru

Jan. 19, 2020

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Good night!

I had studied English at a cafe until a while ago. I finally completed making Eglish long sentences and tried to post here but couldn't do it because the phone's battery ran out. I was pretty bummed out because I worked quite hard on making a long sentences. I post this message about my sad feeling ahead of the long sentences. The long ones will be posted tomorrow. Good night!


私はさっきまでカフェで勉強してました。やっと英作文が完成し、投稿しようとしたらバッテリーが切れてしまいました。頑張って長い文章を書いたのにガッカリです。この気持ちを打ち明けたくて先にこのことを投稿しました。長いメールは明日投稿します。おやすみなさい!

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I had studied English at a cafe until a while ago.

I finally completed making Eglish longlong English sentences and tried to post them here but couldn't do it because themy phone's battery ran out.

I was pretty bummed out because I worked quite hard on making athe long sentences.

Instead, I am posting this message about my sad feeling ahead ofs before the long sentences.

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michiru

Jan. 20, 2020

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Thank you very much!

Good night!

I had studied English at a cafe until a (little) while ago.

I finally completed making Eglishmade/wrote long sentences andin English. I tried to post them here, but couldn't do it because themy phone's battery ran out.

I was pretty bummed out because I worked quitereally hard on making a long/writing those sentences.

Instead, I am posting this message about my sad feeling ahead ofs before I post the long sentences.

The long ones will be posted tomorrow.

Good night!

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Looking forward to seeing them!

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michiru

Jan. 20, 2020

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Thank you very much!

Good night!


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I had studied English at a cafe until a while ago.


I had studied English at a cafe until a (little) while ago.

I had studied English at a cafe until a while ago.

I finally completed making Eglish long sentences and tried to post here but couldn't do it because the phone's battery ran out.


I finally completed making Eglishmade/wrote long sentences andin English. I tried to post them here, but couldn't do it because themy phone's battery ran out.

I finally completed making Eglish longlong English sentences and tried to post them here but couldn't do it because themy phone's battery ran out.

I was pretty bummed out because I worked quite hard on making a long sentences.


I was pretty bummed out because I worked quitereally hard on making a long/writing those sentences.

I was pretty bummed out because I worked quite hard on making athe long sentences.

I post this message about my sad feeling ahead of the long sentences.


Instead, I am posting this message about my sad feeling ahead ofs before I post the long sentences.

Instead, I am posting this message about my sad feeling ahead ofs before the long sentences.

The long ones will be posted tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Good night!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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