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Jan. 17, 2023

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Chinese New Year is approaching. There are some old traditions are continued, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat". Cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good coming luck. Today, granny told us about another tradition that we've never heard about before. First, We need to collect five different colours of clothes which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white. Sewing them into pockets, and putting 5 different kind of beans in. Red pocket for red bean, yellow for soya bean, blue for black soya bean, green for mung and white for white-eyed pea. At last, five pockets put together in one bag. Hiding this bag under the pillow till the Beginning of Spring. On the of Beginning of Spring, open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home. This ritual is done.
We aksed granny what is this five beans represented. Granny had no idea. We laughed, we made wishes together, no mater what we had a great time. I think that's the core for this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.

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Good Luck

Chinese New Year is approaching.

There are some old traditions arewhich continued, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat" or cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in the hopes of good luck entering.

Cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good coming luck.

Today, granny told us about another tradition that we'ved never heard about before.

First, Wwe need to collect five different colours of clothes which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white.

Sewing them into pockets,Then we need to sew pockets into them and putting 5 five different kinds of beans in the pockets.

RThe red pocket is for red beans, yellow for soya beans, blue for black soya beans, green for mung and white for white-eyed peas.

At last,Finally, put the five pockets put together in one bag.

Hidinge this bag under theyour pillow untill the Bbeginning of Spring.

OnAt the of Bbeginning of Spring, open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home.

This ritualis the ritual which is done.

We aksked granny what is thisthe five beans represented.

Granny had no idea.

We laughed, we made wishes together, no matter what we had a great time.

I think that's the core ofor this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.

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Jan. 19, 2023

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Good Luck

Chinese New Year is approaching.

There are some old traditions are continuobserved, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat".

What is “ninyabaat”?

Today, my/our granny told us about another tradition that we'ved never heard about before.

Alternatively, instead of adding “my” or “our,” you could capitalize “Granny.”

There are some old traditions are continuthat are observed, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat".

'Continued' makes sense but we usually say in English about 'observing' traditions.

CThis means cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good luck in the coming luckyear.

Today, granny told us about another tradition that we've never heard about before.

First, Wwe need to collect five different colours of clothes, which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white.

I am assuming you mean 'cloth', which is another word for fabric, rather than 'clothes', which is what you wear.

SewingWe sew them into pockets, and putting 5 five different kinds of beans in.

RThere is a red pocket for the red beans, yellow for the soya beans, blue for the black soya beans, green for mungthe mung beans and white for white-eyed peas.

At last,Finally, the five pockets are put together in one bag.

HidingWe hide this bag under theour pillow s untill the Bbeginning of Sspring.

On the of Beginningfirst day of Spring, we open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home.

You could say 'on the first day of spring' or 'at the beginning of spring'.

This ritual is doneis the end of the ritual.

We aksked granny what is thisthese five beans represented.

Granny had no idea.

We laughed, we made wishes together, and no matter what, we had a great time.

I think that's the core foridea of this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.

Good Luck


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Chinese New Year is approaching.


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There are some old traditions are continued, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat".


There are some old traditions are continuthat are observed, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat".

'Continued' makes sense but we usually say in English about 'observing' traditions.

There are some old traditions are continuobserved, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat".

What is “ninyabaat”?

There are some old traditions arewhich continued, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat" or cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in the hopes of good luck entering.

Cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good coming luck.


CThis means cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good luck in the coming luckyear.

Cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good coming luck.

Today, granny told us about another tradition that we've never heard about before.


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Today, my/our granny told us about another tradition that we'ved never heard about before.

Alternatively, instead of adding “my” or “our,” you could capitalize “Granny.”

Today, granny told us about another tradition that we'ved never heard about before.

First, We need to collect five different colours of clothes which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white.


First, Wwe need to collect five different colours of clothes, which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white.

I am assuming you mean 'cloth', which is another word for fabric, rather than 'clothes', which is what you wear.

First, Wwe need to collect five different colours of clothes which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white.

Sewing them into pockets, and putting 5 different kind of beans in.


SewingWe sew them into pockets, and putting 5 five different kinds of beans in.

Sewing them into pockets,Then we need to sew pockets into them and putting 5 five different kinds of beans in the pockets.

Red pocket for red bean, yellow for soya bean, blue for black soya bean, green for mung and white for white-eyed pea.


RThere is a red pocket for the red beans, yellow for the soya beans, blue for the black soya beans, green for mungthe mung beans and white for white-eyed peas.

RThe red pocket is for red beans, yellow for soya beans, blue for black soya beans, green for mung and white for white-eyed peas.

At last, five pockets put together in one bag.


At last,Finally, the five pockets are put together in one bag.

At last,Finally, put the five pockets put together in one bag.

Hiding this bag under the pillow till the Beginning of Spring.


HidingWe hide this bag under theour pillow s untill the Bbeginning of Sspring.

Hidinge this bag under theyour pillow untill the Bbeginning of Spring.

On the of Beginning of Spring, open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home.


On the of Beginningfirst day of Spring, we open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home.

You could say 'on the first day of spring' or 'at the beginning of spring'.

OnAt the of Bbeginning of Spring, open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home.

This ritual is done.


This ritual is doneis the end of the ritual.

This ritualis the ritual which is done.

We aksed granny what is this five beans represented.


We aksked granny what is thisthese five beans represented.

We aksked granny what is thisthe five beans represented.

Granny had no idea.


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We laughed, we made wishes together, no mater what we had a great time.


We laughed, we made wishes together, and no matter what, we had a great time.

We laughed, we made wishes together, no matter what we had a great time.

I think that's the core for this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.


I think that's the core foridea of this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.

I think that's the core ofor this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.

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