May 8, 2020
Good evening!
At 6 o'clock, my aunt and I went on a long walk. After breakfast, I cleaned up my house. Because I was satisfied to clean up my house, I went to bed soon after. I have to do my homework, but I always do my hobby. While I stay home, my life will be lazy.
Good evening!
At 6 o'clock, my aunt and I went on a long walk.
After breakfast, I cleaned up my house.
Because I was satisfied towith cleaning up my house, I went to bed soon after.
While I stay home, my life will be lazy.
Good evening!
At 6 o'clock, my aunt and I went on a long walk.
After breakfast, I cleaned up my house.
Because I was satisfied to clean up mywith my clean house, I went to bed soon after.
Saying something like "Because I was happy with the cleaning" or "Because I was happy with it, I went to bed soon after." sounds better, but what you wrote isn't wrong.
I have to do my homework, but I always do my hobby instead.
Good sentence, I feel an "instead" here is implied and sounds better with it added.
While I stay'm at home, my life will bestays lazy.
The sentence is fine, it just doesn't really match the tense of the rest of the journal.
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At 6 o'clock, my aunt and I went on a long walk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After breakfast, I cleaned up my house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I was satisfied to clean up my house, I went to bed soon after. Because I was satisfied Saying something like "Because I was happy with the cleaning" or "Because I was happy with it, I went to bed soon after." sounds better, but what you wrote isn't wrong. Because I was satisfied |
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I have to do my homework, but I always do my hobby. I have to do my homework, but I always do my hobby instead. Good sentence, I feel an "instead" here is implied and sounds better with it added. |
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While I stay home, my life will be lazy. While I The sentence is fine, it just doesn't really match the tense of the rest of the journal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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