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May 2, 2023

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"Good Doctor"

First of all, I want to say this tv-show for people with a big scale of patience. You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each series is one hour. If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives" I can say for sure you will like "Good Doctor".
This is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder. He just finished medical university, his informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in the hospital and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-show) to get work at this hospital.
Every season shows how much effort Shon makes to be a part of society. He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them. He always wanted to say the truth, but the real world is different, and sometimes you should lie to save people's feelings. Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him and he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to be a doctor.
Of course, I do not know any tv-show without a love story and this one is no exception. Shon met one cute girl who wanted to be with him just friends, and for the first time, it was like she planned. Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she felt for him. They did a big work to be together and assure everyone that they are the same family as others.

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First of all, I want to say this tv-show is for people with a big scalelot of of patience.

"Big" is used for countable nouns (ex: dog/dogs, apple/apples)

You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and, 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each series is one hourone hour each episode.

If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives", then I can say for sure (that) you will like "Good Doctor".

This is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder.

He just finished medical university, his informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in the hospital and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-show) to get work at this hospital.

Every season shows how much effort Shon makes to be a part of society.

He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them.

Not sure what you mean by "correct"

He always wanted to say the truth, but in the real world is different, and, sometimes you should lie to savpare people's feelings.

You say "the real world is different," but I don't know what the real world is different from. His life/world before he got work at the hospital?

Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him, and/so he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to bedeciding to quit being a doctor.

Sounds more natural this way

Of course, I do not know any tv-show without a love story and this one is no exception.

Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she feltrealizes she has feelings for him.

They did a biglot of work to be together and assure everyone that they are the samejust as much a family as others.

"Good Doctor"

First of all, I want to say this tv-TV show is for people with a big scalelot of patience.

You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each seriesepisode is one hour.

If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives," I can say for sure you will like "Good Doctor".

ThisIt is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder.

He just finished medical university, h. His informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in thea hospital, and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-TV show) to get work at thise hospital.

Every season shows how much effort Shon makes to be a part of society.

He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them.

I am not sure what you mean by being correct with patients

Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him, and he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to be a doctor.

Of course, I do not know any tv-TV show without a love story, and this one is no exception.

Shon met one cute girl who wanted to be with him just as friends, and for the first time, it was like she planned it.

Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she felthaving feelings for him.

They did a biglot of work to be together and assure everyone that they are the samejust as much a family as others.

Feedback

I would say pick either present tense or past tense and stick with that for the whole thing, just for style purposes. Good job - this is a well-written summary!

"Good Doctor"


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First of all, I want to say this tv-show for people with a big scale of patience.


First of all, I want to say this tv-TV show is for people with a big scalelot of patience.

First of all, I want to say this tv-show is for people with a big scalelot of of patience.

"Big" is used for countable nouns (ex: dog/dogs, apple/apples)

You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each series is one hour.


You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each seriesepisode is one hour.

You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and, 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each series is one hourone hour each episode.

If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives" I can say for sure you will like "Good Doctor".


If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives," I can say for sure you will like "Good Doctor".

If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives", then I can say for sure (that) you will like "Good Doctor".

This is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder.


ThisIt is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder.

This is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder.

He just finished medical university, his informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in the hospital and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-show) to get work at this hospital.


He just finished medical university, h. His informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in thea hospital, and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-TV show) to get work at thise hospital.

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Every season shows how much effort Shon makes to be a part of society.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them.


He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them.

I am not sure what you mean by being correct with patients

He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them.

Not sure what you mean by "correct"

He always wanted to say the truth, but the real world is different, and sometimes you should lie to save people's feelings.


He always wanted to say the truth, but in the real world is different, and, sometimes you should lie to savpare people's feelings.

You say "the real world is different," but I don't know what the real world is different from. His life/world before he got work at the hospital?

Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him and he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to be a doctor.


Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him, and he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to be a doctor.

Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him, and/so he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to bedeciding to quit being a doctor.

Sounds more natural this way

Of course, I do not know any tv-show without a love story and this one is no exception.


Of course, I do not know any tv-TV show without a love story, and this one is no exception.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Shon met one cute girl who wanted to be with him just friends, and for the first time, it was like she planned.


Shon met one cute girl who wanted to be with him just as friends, and for the first time, it was like she planned it.

Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she felt for him.


Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she felthaving feelings for him.

Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she feltrealizes she has feelings for him.

They did a big work to be together and assure everyone that they are the same family as others.


They did a biglot of work to be together and assure everyone that they are the samejust as much a family as others.

They did a biglot of work to be together and assure everyone that they are the samejust as much a family as others.

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