Oct. 27, 2021
Going to the park
Hello Sammy.
How are you? I was doing a lot of homework today so I feel that I am very tired and because of this I decided to go to the park for walking. Could you join me?
I am sure we would have a good time together. There are many interesting things at the park so that we can eat ice-cream, breathe of fresh air, playing ball on the grass or maybe we can do some little picnic.
What do you think? Write to me back as soon as possible.
Going to the park
Hello Sammy.
How are you?
I was doing a lot of homework today so I feel that I am very tired and because of this I decided to go to the park for a walking.
Could you join me?
I am sure we would have a good time together.
There are many interesting things at the park so that w. We can eat ice-cream, get a breathe of fresh air, playing ball on the grass or maybe we can do somehave a little picnic.
We "have" a picnic, not "do" a picnic.
What do you think?
Write to me back as soon as possible.
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Your English is very good! Just a couple of minor errors.
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Hello Sammy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How are you? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was doing a lot of homework today so I feel that I am very tired and because of this I decided to go to the park for walking. I was doing a lot of homework today so I feel |
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Could you join me? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am sure we would have a good time together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are many interesting things at the park so that we can eat ice-cream, breathe of fresh air, playing ball on the grass or maybe we can do some little picnic. There are many interesting things at the park We "have" a picnic, not "do" a picnic. |
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What do you think? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Write to me back as soon as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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