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"Hello everyone," sounds a bit better here.

I appreciate your kind help in editing this draft for me in your outstanding, and eloquent way.

"Most companies might have success in launching new services successfully, but only a few of them can bring this to a successful inclusion by making a buzz/breakthrough in the market by launching unprecedented campaigns that drive the growth rate of a company to be multiplied.

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I hope that you will find your need is consistent with my enthusiasm and that my application getreceives your support.

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Making "great strides" basically means making great progress, which is what I think you're referring to.

Hello all,

"Most companies might success in launching new services successfully, but only a few of them can bring this to a successful iconclusion by making a buzz/breakthrough in the market by, and launching unprecedented campaigns that drive growth rate to be multipledmultiply the company's growth rate.

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"long-term" needs a hyphen in between, because it is an adjective in this case. Contrast this with "make an impact over the long term."

This is what I excel in,; this is where you can use me as a consultant, and this is how I can make a big difference withfor you.

If the chance came and I joined you to use my service as a consultant, you willould notice a big buzz will happen in the market after launching unprecedented campaigns that have never launched in Germany butor in the entirety of Europe, a. The kind of campaigns that would make the specialized marketeres and customers will stoppause in front of them too long wondering advertisements, marveling at how unique they are.

"Stop in front of them too long" sounds negative instead of positive. "Wondering" does not seem like the best word choice for what you are trying to say. The ads could be so good that they inspire a sense of wonder, but this is not the same connotation as wondering.

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This seems like an opportunity to demonstrate knowledge about this particular employer, and say what has caused you to apply for a job with them specifically.

I hope that you will find your need is consistent with my enthusiasmskillset, and my application gets your support.

"Need is consistent with my enthusiasm" sounds strange; employers typically need employees with certain skills, not just employees with high enthusiasm.

I commit that in my first 3 month will make a leap and arbiter/touchstone between us is the outcome and the impact and what I give you a brief about hers of employment you would see the results I describe above.

ThanksSincerely,

If this is part of the formal letter, you should say something more formal like "Sincerely."