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Shxd1ow

March 28, 2025

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Going to a bakery

Aujourd'hui, je suis allee a la boulangerie. J'ai eu un croissant. J'ai mange le croissant. Le croissant a ete tres bon. J'ai ete contente et tres heureux.


Today, I went to the bakery. I got a croissant. I ate the croissant. The croissant was very good. I was content and very happy. (I don't know how to add accents on PC).

Corrections

Going to a bakeryÀ la boulangerie

Aujourd'hui, je suis alleée aà la boulangerie.

J'ai eupris/acheté un croissant.

"avoir" implies you don't have the choice, that you're offered something, so it sounds off in contexts where you do pick/order your food. French kids often ask "qu'est-ce qu'on A à la cantine à midi?", for instance

J'ai mangeé le croissant.

Or "je L'ai mangé", to avoid repetitions

Le croissant a eteétait treès bon.

I'd naturally use an imparfait here, since you focus on a background description => était

J'ai ete contenteété/J'étais satisfait(e) et treès heureux [heureuse ?].

Same thing here: although "ai été" isn't wrong, "étais" would be better
"content" in modern French rather means "glad" or "merry", as it's quite old-fashioned in the English sense. Today we'd rather say "satisfait"
If you're a female => satisfaitE, heureuSE

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For special characters, I often use the Lexilogos virtual keyboards, as I find them convenient. Here's the one for French => https://www.lexilogos.com/keyboard/french.htm

Aujourd'hui, je suis allee a la boulangerie.


Aujourd'hui, je suis alleée aà la boulangerie.

J'ai eu un croissant.


J'ai eupris/acheté un croissant.

"avoir" implies you don't have the choice, that you're offered something, so it sounds off in contexts where you do pick/order your food. French kids often ask "qu'est-ce qu'on A à la cantine à midi?", for instance

J'ai mange le croissant.


J'ai mangeé le croissant.

Or "je L'ai mangé", to avoid repetitions

Le croissant a ete tres bon.


Le croissant a eteétait treès bon.

I'd naturally use an imparfait here, since you focus on a background description => était

J'ai ete contente et tres heureux.


J'ai ete contenteété/J'étais satisfait(e) et treès heureux [heureuse ?].

Same thing here: although "ai été" isn't wrong, "étais" would be better "content" in modern French rather means "glad" or "merry", as it's quite old-fashioned in the English sense. Today we'd rather say "satisfait" If you're a female => satisfaitE, heureuSE

Going to a bakery


Going to a bakeryÀ la boulangerie

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