Aug. 14, 2025
Going Abroad with My Daughters
I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from illness.
This time, I want to take my daughters with me so they can experience being abroad.
Since I’ll be traveling with them, I plan to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things on the spur of the moment like I usually do.
If it were just me, I wouldn’t mind eating casually, but with my daughters, that won’t really be an option.
友人のお見舞いにチェコに行こうと考えている。来年の春になる。今回は娘たちを連れて海外を見させてあげたい。ゆえに娘を連れて行くから、今までのように行き当たりばったりではなくしっかりと予定を立てて行こうと思っている。僕一人なら食事も適当に済ますのだが娘を一緒だとそういう訳にもいかないなあ。
Going Abroad with My Daughters
ALSO POSSIBLE* I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from an illness.
The original is possible, but to my American ears the correction above sounds more possible.
This time, I want to take my daughters with me so they can experience being abroad.
ALSO POSSIBLE: Since I’ll be traveling with them, I planneed to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things on the spur of the moment like I usually do.
NOTE: Your original wording is also fine.
WITH SOME HUMOR: If itI were just mtraveling alone, I wouldn’t mind eating casually, but with my daughter. However, since my daughters are little princesses, that won’t really be an option.
注：この文に少しユーモアを加えてしまいました。大丈夫でしょうか！NOTE: I could not resist adding some humor to this sentence. I hope that is okay!
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you for corrections and your humor. はい、大丈夫です。It is true that they could be princesses, if times were different.
Going Abroad with My Daughters
I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from illness.
This time, I want to take my daughters with me so they can experience being abroad.
Since I’ll be traveling with them, I plan to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things on the spur of the moment like I usually do.
If it were just me, I wouldn’t mind eating casually, but with my daughters, that won’t really be an option.
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you！
Going Abroad with My Daughters
I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from an illness.
This time, I want to take my daughters with me so they can experience being abroad.
Since I’ll be traveling with them, I plan to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things oin the spur of the moment like I usually do.
If it were just me, I wouldn’t mind eating casually, but with my daughters, that won’t really be an option.
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Great writing, only minor errors! I hope your friend gets well, and your daughters enjoy their time abroad!
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you for your corrections and heartful message.
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I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from illness. I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from an illness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! ALSO POSSIBLE* I’m thinking of going to the Czech Republic next spring to visit a friend who has been suffering from an illness. The original is possible, but to my American ears the correction above sounds more possible. |
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Since I’ll be traveling with them, I plan to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things on the spur of the moment like I usually do. Since I’ll be traveling with them, I plan to make a proper itinerary instead of doing things This sentence has been marked as perfect! ALSO POSSIBLE: Since I’ll be traveling with them, I NOTE: Your original wording is also fine. |
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If it were just me, I wouldn’t mind eating casually, but with my daughters, that won’t really be an option. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! WITH SOME HUMOR: If 注：この文に少しユーモアを加えてしまいました。大丈夫でしょうか！NOTE: I could not resist adding some humor to this sentence. I hope that is okay! |
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