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July 26, 2022

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For what reason it gives goblets and medal . We shouldn't waste fuels for metal and chain a paper with the congratulate is enough. But the people would like more gold cups and metal. I don't know who come of the idea with the goblets. I have no idea I mean yes it is a award and the most are out of plastic. I belive there are out of gold and so epensive because the presentation the winner. The people work so hard for this symbol of win and hard working. When if so see I understood why there gives. But I thought an certificate easily is better with a stamp and sign and more.I thought that is better than a goblet really .But I understood goblets are great and cost thanks for listening. Everyone has the law of his own opinion then we are free.

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gobletTrophies

Although trophies and goblets may look like each other, "trophy" is preferred to describe that it is a reward given at the end of a competition, whereas a "goblet" is intended to be drunk out of. You should also use the plural in your title to describe that you are generally talking about this subject. Lastly, you should always capitalize your title.

For what reason it gives gobletare there trophies and medal .s?

This is a question, so it should have a question mark at the end. There also shouldn't be a space between the punctuation and the last word in the sentence.

"Es gibt" shouldn't be literally translated to "it gives" because this doesn't have the same meaning in English. The proper translation would be "there are".

For "trophies" (or "goblets") you correctly used the plural. You should also use the plural for "medals". We can figure this out by replacing the group of objects with single objects in the group. It would be correct to say "For what reason are there medals?" On the other hand, it would not be correct to say "For what reason are there medal?" or "For what reason is there medal?"

gGoblets

For what reason it gives gobletdo we give trophies and medal .s?

"Goblet" is an old term. It is mostly used in fictional works like Harry Potter. We usually call awards like that "trophies".

We shouldn't waste fuels for on metdals and chain as when a piece of paper with the word "congratulateions" is enough.

But the people would like more gold cups and metdals.

Metal: The solid, durable element from the Earth.
Medal: An award given to a participant

I don't know who coame ofup with the idea withof the goblets.

I have no idea! I mean yes, it is an award and the most are made out of plastic.

Words starting with vowels (a, i, e, o, u) use "an", not "a", as the indefinite article:
A cat, a dog, a horse, a terrible time
An ostrich, an owl, an umbrella, an ingenious idea

I believe there ary are made out of gold and so expensive because theo presentation the winner.

Let me know if I understood correctly.

The pPeople work so hard for this symbol of win and harvictory and working hard.

You don't need an article when you're talking about people in general, e.g:
The person I met this morning wants a new shirt.
People want new shirts.

When if so see I understoodSo I see why they're givesn.

Or, "When I see one, I understand why it is given".

But I thoughtink an certificate easily is better w. With a stamp and sign and more. I thoughtink that is better than a goblet, really . But I understooand goblets are great and cost texpensive. Thanks for listening.

Present tense (because you still believe this)

Everyone has the law ofcan have his own opinion thenbecause we are free.

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prisci

July 27, 2022

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gGoblets

As you are writing about goblets in general, it would be better to write "goblets" plural.
Titles need a capital letter

For what reason itdo we gives goblets and medal s.

We shouldn't waste fuels forenergy on metals and chain a papers for rewards, a certificate with the congratulateions is enough.

But the people would like more gold cups and metals.

I don't know who coame ofup with the idea with theof goblets.

I have no idea, I mean yes it is a award and the most are made out of plastic.

I believe there are out ofit's because gold andis so expensive because the presentation the winner.

I don't know what you mean by the last part

The pPeople work so hard for this symbol of winning and hard working.

When if so seeIf so, I understooand why therwe gives them.

I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say here.

But I thoughtink an certificate easily is better with a stamp and sign and moature. I thoughtink that it is better than a goblet really .B, but I understooand goblets are great and cost t. Thanks for listenreading.

"Thought" and "understood" are both in the past tense

Everyone has the law of his own opinion then we are freeis allowed to have their own opinion.

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Great writing! I think when writing "goblets" you mean "trophies"? We don't really use the word "goblets" to describe something we get when winning something, they are a fancy kind of drinking receptacle.

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July 27, 2022

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goblet


gGoblets

As you are writing about goblets in general, it would be better to write "goblets" plural. Titles need a capital letter

gGoblets

gobletTrophies

Although trophies and goblets may look like each other, "trophy" is preferred to describe that it is a reward given at the end of a competition, whereas a "goblet" is intended to be drunk out of. You should also use the plural in your title to describe that you are generally talking about this subject. Lastly, you should always capitalize your title.

For what reason it gives goblets and medal .


For what reason itdo we gives goblets and medal s.

For what reason it gives gobletdo we give trophies and medal .s?

"Goblet" is an old term. It is mostly used in fictional works like Harry Potter. We usually call awards like that "trophies".

For what reason it gives gobletare there trophies and medal .s?

This is a question, so it should have a question mark at the end. There also shouldn't be a space between the punctuation and the last word in the sentence. "Es gibt" shouldn't be literally translated to "it gives" because this doesn't have the same meaning in English. The proper translation would be "there are". For "trophies" (or "goblets") you correctly used the plural. You should also use the plural for "medals". We can figure this out by replacing the group of objects with single objects in the group. It would be correct to say "For what reason are there medals?" On the other hand, it would not be correct to say "For what reason are there medal?" or "For what reason is there medal?"

We shouldn't waste fuels for metal and chain a paper with the congratulate is enough.


We shouldn't waste fuels forenergy on metals and chain a papers for rewards, a certificate with the congratulateions is enough.

We shouldn't waste fuels for on metdals and chain as when a piece of paper with the word "congratulateions" is enough.

But the people would like more gold cups and metal.


But the people would like more gold cups and metals.

But the people would like more gold cups and metdals.

Metal: The solid, durable element from the Earth. Medal: An award given to a participant

I don't know who come of the idea with the goblets.


I don't know who coame ofup with the idea with theof goblets.

I don't know who coame ofup with the idea withof the goblets.

I have no idea I mean yes it is a award and the most are out of plastic.


I have no idea, I mean yes it is a award and the most are made out of plastic.

I have no idea! I mean yes, it is an award and the most are made out of plastic.

Words starting with vowels (a, i, e, o, u) use "an", not "a", as the indefinite article: A cat, a dog, a horse, a terrible time An ostrich, an owl, an umbrella, an ingenious idea

I belive there are out of gold and so epensive because the presentation the winner.


I believe there are out ofit's because gold andis so expensive because the presentation the winner.

I don't know what you mean by the last part

I believe there ary are made out of gold and so expensive because theo presentation the winner.

Let me know if I understood correctly.

The people work so hard for this symbol of win and hard working.


The pPeople work so hard for this symbol of winning and hard working.

The pPeople work so hard for this symbol of win and harvictory and working hard.

You don't need an article when you're talking about people in general, e.g: The person I met this morning wants a new shirt. People want new shirts.

When if so see I understood why there gives.


When if so seeIf so, I understooand why therwe gives them.

I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say here.

When if so see I understoodSo I see why they're givesn.

Or, "When I see one, I understand why it is given".

But I thought it were easily paper for that to take.


But I thought it were an certificate easily a paper with a stamp and sign where all the best about you stand.


But I understood goblets are great and cost thanks for listening.


But I thought an certificate easily is better with a stamp and sign and more.I thought that is better than a goblet really .But I understood goblets are great and cost thanks for listening.


But I thoughtink an certificate easily is better with a stamp and sign and moature. I thoughtink that it is better than a goblet really .B, but I understooand goblets are great and cost t. Thanks for listenreading.

"Thought" and "understood" are both in the past tense

But I thoughtink an certificate easily is better w. With a stamp and sign and more. I thoughtink that is better than a goblet, really . But I understooand goblets are great and cost texpensive. Thanks for listening.

Present tense (because you still believe this)

Everyone has the law of his own opinion.


Everyone has the law of his own opinion then we are free.


Everyone has the law of his own opinion then we are freeis allowed to have their own opinion.

Everyone has the law ofcan have his own opinion thenbecause we are free.

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