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Happy Lantern Festival！
It's Lantern Festival today.
I went to a classical garden to join a local activity. It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.
I'm really tired now. So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ
If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.
Happy Lantern Festival！
Happy Lantern Festival！!
It's the Lantern Festival today.
I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.
It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.
I'm really tired now.
So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ
If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.
Happy Lantern Festival！!
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Wow, this video looks so professional. It's really beautiful in different way from your hiking videos, and it looks like you put a lot of work into it. (I guess that means you are a real pro if you can do such high quality work quickly!) Thank you for sharing!
Happy Lantern Festival！!
It's Lantern Festival today.
I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.
It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back homleave around 6 pm.
At first I thought there was something you had to do at home. This edit puts more emphasis on leaving early to better express the point of the sentence.
I'm really tired now.
So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ
If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.
Happy Lantern Festival！!
Happy Lantern Festival！!
The double-byte punctuation looks weird in English :-)
It's the Lantern Festival today.
Alternative: Today is the Lantern Festival.
I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.
It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had {to leave to go back home | to leave for home | to head home} around 6 pm.
“I had to go back home around 6pm” could mean you had to arrive home around 6pm, but I assume you mean you had to leave around 6pm in order not to arrive home too late (or in order to catch a specific bus or train).
I'm really tired now., so…
Merge this with the next sentence.
So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video forwith you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ
“For” is OK, but “share… with” is more natural.
If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.
Happy Lantern Festival！!
Happy Lantern Festival！!
It was fun, but the location iwas a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.
Happy Lantern Festival！!
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There was quite a big space between the word and ! so I edited it.
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It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm. It was fun, but the location It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had {to leave to go back home | to leave for home | to head home} around 6 pm. “I had to go back home around 6pm” could mean you had to arrive home around 6pm, but I assume you mean you had to leave around 6pm in order not to arrive home too late (or in order to catch a specific bus or train). It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to At first I thought there was something you had to do at home. This edit puts more emphasis on leaving early to better express the point of the sentence. It was fun, but the location is a little far away |
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So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video “For” is OK, but “share… with” is more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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