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Tammy

March 3, 2026

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Happy Lantern Festival!

It's Lantern Festival today.

I went to a classical garden to join a local activity. It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.

I'm really tired now. So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ

If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.

Happy Lantern Festival!

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I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.

I'm really tired now.

So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ

If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.

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Tammy

March 4, 2026

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Tammy

March 4, 2026

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It's Lantern Festival today.

I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.

I'm really tired now.

So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ

If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.

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Tammy

March 4, 2026

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I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.

If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.

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Tammy

March 4, 2026

2

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jaspuurrrr

March 3, 2026

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Tammy

March 4, 2026

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Happy Lantern Festival!


Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

The double-byte punctuation looks weird in English :-)

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

It's Lantern Festival today.


It's the Lantern Festival today. It's the Lantern Festival today.

Alternative: Today is the Lantern Festival.

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It's the Lantern Festival today. It's the Lantern Festival today.

I went to a classical garden to join a local activity.


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It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.


It was fun, but the location iwas a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm. It was fun, but the location was a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm.

It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had {to leave to go back home | to leave for home | to head home} around 6 pm. It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had {to leave to go back home | to leave for home | to head home} around 6 pm.

“I had to go back home around 6pm” could mean you had to arrive home around 6pm, but I assume you mean you had to leave around 6pm in order not to arrive home too late (or in order to catch a specific bus or train).

It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back homleave around 6 pm. It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to leave around 6 pm.

At first I thought there was something you had to do at home. This edit puts more emphasis on leaving early to better express the point of the sentence.

It was fun, but the location is a little far away, so I had to go back home around 6 pm. It was fun, but the location is a little far away so I had to go back home around 6 pm.

I'm really tired now.


I'm really tired now., so… I'm really tired now, so…

Merge this with the next sentence.

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So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ


So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video forwith you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ So I just came here to share this quickly-edited video with you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZVSUuBUVkMQ

“For” is OK, but “share… with” is more natural.

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If you have any advice or questions, feel free to share them with me.


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Happy Lantern Festival!


Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

Happy Lantern Festival! Happy Lantern Festival!

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