July 11, 2020
Globalization
We live in a world where countries are tightly connected with each other. The world economics has become global a long time ago. We have China, that is the world giant factory, and India who tend to become the world office. They are two most populated countries in the world. Some countries, like Russia, are the world resource deliverer. They economics are greatly tangled to the oil prices. In Kazakhstan, we have that resource based economics as well. I've recently realized, that our economics mostly based on importing goods and selling them inside the country.
Culturally, there are two main trends: multiculturalism and the domination of pop-culture. I don't know much about multiculturalism. Not being an American or European, I don't have much to say about it. I think the second trend is obvious for everyone. As the global society, we have one dominant cultural influence. It comes from the USA in the form of music, movies and lifestyle. So, as if we were in Civilization 5 video game, I would say that the USA has achieved the cultural victory and every country now "is wearing their blue jeans and listening to their pop-music".
Globalization
We live in a world where countries are tightly connected with each other.
In Kazakhstan, we have thata resource based economicsy as well.¶
'a' or 'the' is more natural than 'that' in this context. economics is the study of the economy, or economies.
Culturally, there are two main trends: multiculturalism and the domination of pop-culture.
I don't know much about multiculturalism.
Not being an American or European, I don't have much to say about it.
I think the second trend is obvious for everyone.
As the global society, we have one dominant cultural influence.
It comes from the USA in the form of music, movies and lifestyle.
So, as if we were in Civilization 5, the video game, I would say that the USA has achieved the cultural victory and every country now "is wearing their blue jeans and listening to their pop-music".
Globalization
We live in a world where countries are tightly connected with each other.
The world's economics haes becoame global a long time ago.
Economics ----> the study of world economies/other financial factors
Economies -----> the flow of money in different regions
We have China, that is the world's giant factory, and India, who tend tohas become the world's office.
They are the two most populated countries in the world.
Some countries, like Russia, are the world's resource deliverers.
Theyir economices are greatly entangled to withe oil prices.
In Kazakhstan, we have that resource based economicsy as well.
I've recently realized, that our economy ics mostly based on importing goods and selling them inside the country.
Culturally, there are two main trends: multiculturalism and the domination of pop-culture.
I don't know much about multiculturalism.
Not being an American or European, I don't have much to say about it.
I think the second trend is obvious for everyone.
As the global society, we have one dominant cultural influence.
It comes from the USA in the form of music, movies and lifestyle.
So, as if we were in Civilization 5 video game, I would say that the USA has achieved the cultural victory and every country now "is wearing their blue jeans and listening to their pop- music".
Globalization
We live in a world where countries are tightly connected with each other.
The worldNational economics haes becoame global a long time ago.
If there is an indication of time, the imperfect should generally be used instead of the present perfect.
“World” economics becoming global doesn’t make sense since they are already global by definition.
We have China, thatwhich is the world’s giant factory, and India, who tend toich is becomeing the world office.
If you’re setting off the clause with a comma, “which” should probably be used.
They are the two most populated countries in the world.
Some countries, like Russia, are the world resource deliverers.
Theyir economices are greatly entangled to withe oil prices.
In Kazakhstan, we have that resource -based economicsy as well.
I've recently realized, that our economicses are mostly based on importing goods and selling them inside the country.
Culturally, there are two main trends: multiculturalism and the domination of pop-culture.
This is correct but I would rephrase it for clarity and flow.
I don't know much about multiculturalism.
Not being an American or European, I don't have much to say about it.
I think the second trend is obvious for everyone.
As the global society, we have one dominant cultural influence.
It comes from the USA in the form of music, movies and lifestyle.
So, as if we were in Civilization 5 video game, I would say that the USA has achieved the cultural victory and every country now "is wearing their blue jeans and listening to their pop-music".
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The world economics has become global a long time ago.
If there is an indication of time, the imperfect should generally be used instead of the present perfect. “World” economics becoming global doesn’t make sense since they are already global by definition. The world's economi Economics ----> the study of world economies/other financial factors Economies -----> the flow of money in different regions |
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We have China, that is the world giant factory, and India who tend to become the world office. We have China, If you’re setting off the clause with a comma, “which” should probably be used. We have China, |
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They are two most populated countries in the world. They are the two most populated countries in the world. They are the two most populated countries in the world. |
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Some countries, like Russia, are the world resource deliverer. Some countries, like Russia, are the world resource deliverers. Some countries, like Russia, are the world's resource deliverers. |
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They economics are greatly tangled to the oil prices. The The |
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I've recently realized, that our economics mostly based on importing goods and selling them inside the country. I've recently realized I've recently realized |
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