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Sept. 9, 2025

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Global Warming

It's common sense that Global Warming is a global preoccupation, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientization. Like: Electric cars, more green places and reduction of pollution. Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes. However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all people. Despite this, let’s first explain what Global Warming means.

Global Warming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, because it’s caused by human activities. The main causes are burning fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas), deforestation, and certain industrial/agricultural practices. Your effects are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems. With all this, it is clear for us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes. It may not seem like it, every person could make the difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the difference.


É senso comum que o Aquecimento Global é uma preocupação global; muitos países enfrentam muitas dificuldades com campanhas de divulgação, alertas e conscientização. Como: carros elétricos, mais áreas verdes e redução da poluição. É claro que existem muitas maneiras de reduzir essas mudanças. No entanto, é muito difícil continuar se isso não afetar todas as pessoas. Apesar disso, vamos primeiro explicar o que significa Aquecimento Global.

O Aquecimento Global ocorre quando a Terra fica mais quente, mas não naturalmente, porque é causado por atividades humanas. As principais causas são a queima de combustíveis fósseis (carvão, petróleo, gás natural), o desmatamento e certas práticas industriais/agrícolas. Seus efeitos são: aumento da temperatura global, derretimento das calotas polares e geleiras, elevação do nível do mar, ondas de calor mais frequentes, tempestades mais fortes e mudanças nos ecossistemas. Com tudo isso, fica claro para nós que, se não mudarmos nossos hábitos, nada mudará. Pode não parecer, cada pessoa pode fazer a diferença, não queremos que nosso lindo mundo seja destruído por nossos atos, faça você a diferença.

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Global Warming

It's common sense that Gglobal Wwarming is a global preoccupation, m. Many countries faced a lot of strugglinge with campaigns atfor divulgation, warnings, and conscientization.

Like: EThis includes electric cars, more green places, and reduction ofing pollution.

Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes.

However, it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all peopleveryone.

Despite this, let’s first explain what Gglobal Wwarming means.

Global Wwarming is when the eEarth gets warmer, but not unnaturally, warmer because it’s caused by human activities.

The main causes are burning fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas), deforestation, and certain industrial/agricultural practices.

YourThe effects are as follows: rising global temperatures, and sea levels; melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise,; more frequent heatwaves,; stronger storms,; and shifts in ecosystems.

With all this, it is clear for us, that if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes.

It may not seem like it, but every person could make the difference, w. We don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, but you could make youall the difference.

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Capitalization and grammar errors aside, you wrote about a complex issue very well! Good job!

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Laian

Sept. 16, 2025

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Many thanks! I knew it if I decide to write a complex issue like Global Warming, i'll need dedicated time to study and guarantee not wrong informations and I'm happy with this result.

It's common sense that Gglobal Wwarming is a global preoccupationfocus, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientizato raise awareness and drive action.

preoccupation has a negative tone, like the thing that is a preoccupation is taking attention unfairly away from other things.

divulgation is an incredibly rare word - it's not going to register as a word to native speakers. It might be archaic, though dictionaries disagree. conscientization is also excessively academic.

Also, global warming is not a proper noun (names a "thing" not a process), so doesn't take capital letters.

Like: EFor example, they have brought in electric cars, more green places and reduction ofed pollution.

Need a little more to turn this into a proper sentence.

Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes impact of global warming.

"changes" here would mean the measures to reduce global warming. If that's what you mean, something like "impede" is a better word. Alternatively, if you are on about the effects of global warming, then you need to use that as the noun again because you introduced a bunch of other nouns that "changes" could refer to in the time since.

However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all peoplecause everyone to make changes.

Again, this sentence is a little too ambiguous so guessing at the intended meaning.

Global Wwarming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, instead because it’s caused by human activities.

YourThe effects on you are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems.

"your effects" would be more something the reader did by themselves.

With all this, it is clear forto us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing will changes.

"will change" is better in this conditional sentence structure.

It may not seem like it, every person could make thea difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the differencrself the change.

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Laian

Sept. 16, 2025

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So many mistakes, holy haha. But it's ok, thanks for all explanation

It's common sense that Global Warming is a global preoccupation, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientization.

Like: Electric cars, more green places and reduction of pollution.

Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes.

However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all people.

Despite this, let’s first explain what Global Warming means.

Global Warming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, because it’s caused by human activities.

The main causes are burning fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas), deforestation, and certain industrial/agricultural practices.

Your effects are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems.

With all this, it is clear for us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes.

It may not seem like it, every person could make the difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the difference.

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Excellent work

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Laian

Sept. 16, 2025

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I know everyone sees a text differently. But knowing I got it right the first time is something very special and meaningful to me. Thank you for this moment.

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It's common sense that Global Warming is a global preoccupation, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientization.


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It's common sense that Gglobal Wwarming is a global preoccupationfocus, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientizato raise awareness and drive action.

preoccupation has a negative tone, like the thing that is a preoccupation is taking attention unfairly away from other things. divulgation is an incredibly rare word - it's not going to register as a word to native speakers. It might be archaic, though dictionaries disagree. conscientization is also excessively academic. Also, global warming is not a proper noun (names a "thing" not a process), so doesn't take capital letters.

It's common sense that Gglobal Wwarming is a global preoccupation, m. Many countries faced a lot of strugglinge with campaigns atfor divulgation, warnings, and conscientization.

Like: Electric cars, more green places and reduction of pollution.


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Like: EFor example, they have brought in electric cars, more green places and reduction ofed pollution.

Need a little more to turn this into a proper sentence.

Like: EThis includes electric cars, more green places, and reduction ofing pollution.

Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes.


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Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes impact of global warming.

"changes" here would mean the measures to reduce global warming. If that's what you mean, something like "impede" is a better word. Alternatively, if you are on about the effects of global warming, then you need to use that as the noun again because you introduced a bunch of other nouns that "changes" could refer to in the time since.

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However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all people.


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However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all peoplecause everyone to make changes.

Again, this sentence is a little too ambiguous so guessing at the intended meaning.

However, it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all peopleveryone.

Despite this, let’s first explain what Global Warming means.


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Despite this, let’s first explain what Gglobal Wwarming means.

Global Warming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, because it’s caused by human activities.


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Global Wwarming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, instead because it’s caused by human activities.

Global Wwarming is when the eEarth gets warmer, but not unnaturally, warmer because it’s caused by human activities.

The main causes are burning fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas), deforestation, and certain industrial/agricultural practices.


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Your effects are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems.


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YourThe effects on you are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems.

"your effects" would be more something the reader did by themselves.

YourThe effects are as follows: rising global temperatures, and sea levels; melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise,; more frequent heatwaves,; stronger storms,; and shifts in ecosystems.

With all this, it is clear for us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes.


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With all this, it is clear forto us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing will changes.

"will change" is better in this conditional sentence structure.

With all this, it is clear for us, that if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes.

It may not seem like it, every person could make the difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the difference.


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It may not seem like it, every person could make thea difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the differencrself the change.

It may not seem like it, but every person could make the difference, w. We don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, but you could make youall the difference.

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