Yesterday, I was out, looking for an optical store where I could find some round glasses.

I've realized that ithey could fit on my face better than the ones I'm currently using, which hasve a rectangular shape and a thick black frame.

Always treat the word glasses like a plural, even if you're only talking about one pair of glasses.

After entering the place, I started to feeling suffocated by the attendants.

This makes it sound a little more natural.

They wanted to sell the expensive ones to me at anyll costs, to the point of me beaking me unconmfortable.

I could see the fiercedetermination in their eyes to make a deal.

After some manipulation ofn their part that I surprisingly fell for, they scheduled an eye exam for today.

I havedidn't gone there.

Saying 'I haven't gone there' implies that you might go there in the future.
Saying 'I didn't go there' means you didn't go and won't go there in the future either.

Instead, I've sent a message to cancel the appointment so I can check a cheaper and more reliable optical store, like the one I bought my current glasses from.

Or, at least a place where the attendants don't seem like they want to look inside your soul and devour your alive heart.

Yesterday, I was out, looking for an optical store where I could find round glasses.

I've realized that ithey could fit on my face better than the ones I'm currently using, which hasve a rectangular shape and a thick black frame.

They wanted to sell the expensive ones to me at any cost, to the point of me beingI was unconmfortable.

I could see the fiercedetermination in their eyes, wanting to make a deal.

After some manipulation ofn their part that I surprisingly fell for, they scheduled an eye exam for today.

I haven't gone there.yet.

Instead, I've sent a message to cancel the appointment so I can checklook for a cheaper and more reliable optical store, like the one where I bought my current glasses.

Or, at least a place where the attendants don't seem like they want to look inside your soul and devour your alive heartheart alive.

Yesterday, I was out, looking for an optical/eyeglass store where I could find round glasses.

After entering the place, I started feeling suffocated by the attendants.

O "I started to feel suffocated"

They wanted to sell the expensive ones to me at any cost, to the point of me being unconmfortable.

I could see the fierceeagerness/desperation in their eyes to make a desale.

After some manipulation ofn their part that I surprisingly fell for, they scheduled an eye exam for today.

I haven't gone back there.

Instead, I' have sent a message to cancel the appointment so I can check out a cheaper and more reliable optical store, like the one I bought from where I bought my current glasses.

A contração está correta mas parece um pouquinho estranha pra mim

Or, at least a place where the attendants don't seem like they want to look inside your soul and devour your alive heartheart alive.