Day 16 Journaling

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Today I am gonna show you what I did in my day.
Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone. Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, I read a few pages of my current book (in English).
At 10 am I wrote the plan for an oral I have to do in 3 months. Maybe you can think that it is in a lot of time, but this is my first oral so I want to be really confident when it will come.
After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the yard to do some gardening.
At 16 pm I read a few pages of my book and I played with my brother and mother.
To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I am writing ✍️.
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Day 16 Journaling

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Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone.

Day 16 Journaling

Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone.

Day 16 Journaling


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Hi. 👋 Hi. 👋

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Today I am gonna show you what I did in my day.


Today I am gonnaing to show you what I did in my today. Today I am going to show you what I did today.

"Gonna" is colloquial, you should write "going to" even in an informal journal like this one.

Today I am gonnaing to show you what I did during my day. Today I am going to show you what I did during my day.

"gonna" is slang. We can use it in writing but I wanted to make sure that you knew that it's slang.

Today I am gonna show you what I did during my day. Today I am gonna show you what I did during my day.

Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone.


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Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and I ate breakfast alone. Today, I woke up at 6:30 am and ate breakfast alone.

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Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, I read a few pages of my current book (in English).


Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, and I read a few pages of my current book (in English). Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson and I read a few pages of my current book (in English).

Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson, I and read a few pages of my current book (in English). Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine: I did my daily Duolingo lesson and read a few pages of my current book (in English).

Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine:. I did my daily Duolingo lesson,. I read a few pages of my current book (in English). Then I went back to my bedroom and did my morning routine. I did my daily Duolingo lesson. I read a few pages of my current book (in English).

At 10 am I wrote the plan for an oral I have to do in 3 months.


At 10 am I wrote the planoutline for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months. At 10 am I wrote the outline for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months.

At 10 am I wrote the plan for an (oral) presentation I have to dogive in 3 months. At 10 am I wrote the plan for an (oral) presentation I have to give in 3 months.

At 10 am I wrote the plan for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months. At 10 am I wrote the plan for an oral exam I have to do in 3 months.

Maybe you can think that it is in a lot of time, but this is my first oral so I want to be really confident when it will come.


Maybe you can think that it is inI still have a lot of time, but this is my first oral exam, so I want to be really confident when it willthe time comes. Maybe you think that I still have a lot of time, but this is my first oral exam, so I want to be really confident when the time comes.

Maybe you canYou might think that ithat is in a lot ofng time from now, but this is my first oralpresentation so I want to be really confident when it willthe time comes. You might think that that is a long time from now, but this is my first presentation so I want to be really confident when the time comes.

Maybe you can think that it is in a lot of timthis is too early to prepare, but this is my first oral so I want to be really confident when it will comes. Maybe you think that this is too early to prepare, but this is my first oral so I want to be really confident when comes.

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the yard to do some gardening.


After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father and I went to the yard to do some gardening. After that I ate lunch with my family and then my father and I went to the yard to do some gardening.

In speech you can say "me and my father" but in writing you should write "my father and I blah blah blah"

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the yard to doand I did some gardening in the yard. After that I ate lunch with my family and then my father and I did some gardening in the yard.

After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the backyard to do some gardening. After that I ate lunch with my family and then me and my father went to the backyard to do some gardening.

back or frontyard?

At 16 pm I read a few pages of my book and I played with my brother and mother.


At 164 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother. At 4 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother.

At 16 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother. At 16 pm I read a few pages of my book and then I played with my brother and mother.

To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I am writing ✍️.


To concludeAt the end of the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I amdid some writing ✍️. At the end of the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I did some writing ✍️.

To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and thennow I am writing ✍️. To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and now I am writing ✍️.

To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and then I ambegan writing ✍️. To conclude the day, I ate dinner with my family and then began writing ✍️.

Thanks for the corrections !!!


Thanks for the corrections !!! Thanks for the corrections!!!

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