Aug. 25, 2025
Giyu Tomioka From Demon Slayer (139)
I wrote about the character Giyu Tomioka in my last entry, and I'd like to write more about him.
He is the character from the anime Demon Slayer and one of the swordsmen of the demon slayers.
Since he looks intimidating and never smiles, no one really talk to him.
Actually, he has a sad backstory.
He used to be best friends with Sabito and they would train hard together to become swordsmen.
Both Sabito and Giyu were promising apprentice.
One day, when they were fighting against demons, Sabito accidentally died.
Giyu was devastated because he died to protect Giyu.
Since then, he has been dwelling on his death, and still can't get over it.
前回の投稿で「富岡義勇」というキャラクターについて書きました。彼についてもう少し書きたいです。
彼は、鬼滅の刃のキャラクターで、鬼殺隊という剣士の一人です。
彼は、近寄りがたい見た目と、決して笑わないことから、誰もあまり彼に話しかけません。
実は彼には悲しい過去があります。
彼は、以前「さびと」という親友がいて、剣士になるためよく一緒にトレーニングをしました。
さびとも義勇も、二人とも将来有望な見習い剣士でした。
ある日、彼らが鬼と戦っている時、思いがけずさびとは死んでしまいました。
さびとは義勇を守ろうとして死んでしまったので、義勇は精神的にとても落ち込んでしまいました。
それ以来、彼は、友達の死をずっと引きずっていて、まだ乗り越えることができません。
Giyu Tomioka Ffrom Demon Slayer
I wrote about the character Giyu Tomioka in my last entry, and I'd like to write more about him.
He is the character from the anime Demon Slayer and one of the swordsmen of the demon slayers.
or: "[...] one of the swordsmen serving as demon slayers."
Since he looks intimidating and never smiles, no one really talks to him.
Actually, he has a sad backstory.
He used to be best friends with Sabito and they would train hard together to become swordsmen.
Both Sabito and Giyu were promising apprentices.
One day, whilen they were fighting against demons, Sabito accidentally died.
Giyu was devastated because he died to protect Giyu.
Since then, he has been dwelling on his death, and still can't get over it.
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Well done!
He is thea character from the anime Demon Slayer and one of the swordsmen of the demon slayers.
Using "the" will be understandable, but "a" is more clear. Saying "the" implies there is only one character, but there are multiple characters from Demon Slayer.
Since he looks intimidating and never smiles, no one really talks to him.
You could also say "because" instead of "since", but both will be understandable.
Both Sabito and Giyu were promising apprentices.
Add an "s" to the end of "apprentices" to make it plural. There are two apprentices, so it's plural.
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Very good! Just a few minor changes to improve clarity.
Aug. 25, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Aug. 25, 2025
You're welcome! :]
Giyu Tomioka From Demon Slayer
I wrote about the character Giyu Tomioka in my last entry, and I'd like to write more about him.
He is the character from the anime Demon Slayer and one of the swordsmen of the demon slayers.
Since he looks intimidating and never smiles, no one really talks to him.
Actually, he has a sad backstory.
He used to be best friends with Sabito and they would train hard together to become swordsmen.
Both Sabito and Giyu were promising apprentice.s.
One day, when they were fighting against demons, Sabito accidentally died.
Giyu was devastated because he died to protect Giyu.
Since then, he has been dwelling on his death, and still can't get over it.
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Sounds like you have been fully engaged into the anime series you struggled to get into the first time!
Good to see you are enjoying it!
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Great writing! ᕕʕ •ₒ• ʔ୨
Aug. 25, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections! Yes! I'm totally hooked. I watched the series three times 😅
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