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Giving some advice
Yesterday, my chief came towards me and asked me for advice about her son- 16 year old boy.
He is a high school student and he likes studying English. She told me that he asked her if he could go to study abroad next year. He explained 10 months studying abroad program which offers him a chance to study in the US or somewhere spoken in English.
She asked me for advice because she knew that I have some experience studying in the US and Russia when I was a university student.
She told me honestly that she felt sad and anxious as soon as she heard about it from her son. I totally understand her feeling, how she got worried about that.
I told her that if he really wants to study abroad and it’s available economically, I recommend her to make his dream come true. But I also insisted that he didn’t have to rush at all. He’s still 16 and I guess there would be a lot of choices in the future.
One last thing I told her is no matter how it was challenging, my experience of studying abroad definitely gave me a huge impact on my life. I’m really grateful for my parents’ support and understanding.
I hope my advice helps her and his son.
Yesterday, my chief(?) came towards me and asked me for advice about her son- - a 16 year old boy.
"Came towards me" is used to express someone physically moving in your direction. When someone is seeking something from you we use "came to me"
Question mark next to chief because I'm not sure if you're talking about your boss, but we only use "chief" for certain occupations or roles (ie. police chief)
He is a high school student and he likes studying English.
She told me that he asked her if he could go to study abroad next year.
He explained to her about a 10 months studying abroad program which offers him a chance to study in the US or somewhere spoken in Englishelse where English is spoken.
She asked me for advice because she knew that I haved some experience studying in the US and Russia when I was a university student.
OR: "because she knows that I have some experience studying in the US and Russia from when I was a university student"
Tense matching... you have to use "from" because the experience is from the past but you're talking about the present
She told me honestly that she felt sad and anxious as soon as she heard about it from her son.
I totally understand her feeling, hows and why she got worried about thait.
I told her that if he really wants to study abroad and it’s available economically, I recommend her tothat she make his dream come true.
But I also insisted that he didn’t have to rush at all.
He’s still 16 and I guess there wouldthere will probably be a lot of choicopportunities in the future.
One last thing I told her is no matter how it was challenging it was, my experience of studying abroad definitely gave mehad a huge impact on my life.
I’m really grateful for my parents’ support and understanding.
I hope my advice helps her and hiser son.
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Great job :)
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Thank you for the details!!
Giving some advice
Yesterday, my chief came towards me and asked me for advice about her son- - a 16 year old boy.
You always "come to" someone for advice, not "come towards"
He is a high school student and he likes studying English.
She told me that he asked her if he could go to study abroad next year.
He explainedtold her about a 10 months studying abroad program which offers him a chance to study in the US or somewhere spoken inelse where they speak English.
She asked me for advice because she knew that I have some experience studying in the US and Russia from when I was a university student.
She told me honestly that she felt sad and anxious as soon as she heard about itthis from her son.
I totally understand her feeling, how she got worried about that.
I told her that if he really wants to study abroad and it’s available economically, I recommend her tothat she make his dream come true.
But I also insisted that he didn’t have to rush at all.
He’s still 16 and I guess there wouldthere will probably be be a lot of choiceoptions in the future.
One last thing I told her is no matter how it was challenging it was, my experience of studying abroad definitely gave mehad a huge impact on my life.
I’m really grateful for my parents’ support and understanding.
I hope my advice helps her and his son.
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Good job! There weren't many actual errors in your post; mostly it was just some phrasing that sounded unnatural, but was still understandable.
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Thank you for correcting!!
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