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sho

May 17, 2022

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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.



B: Excuse me? Could you help me?
A: Yeah. Sure.
B: Are we anywhere near the Sunrise hotel?
A: Oh, Sorry, I’m not sure. Umm, if you're not in a rush, I'll look it up now.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: No, worries. Wait a minute.
B: Okay.
A: Sunrise hotel, right?
B: Yes!
A: Okay. If Mr. Google isn't mistaken, this should get us there. Right this way.
B: Oh, are you gonna show me there?
A: Sure! But if you want.
B: Oh, thank you!

Corrections

Umm, if you're not in a rush, I'll can look it up now.

Wait a minute.

Can also say: "Just a minute." or "Hold on a minute."

If Mr. Google isn't mistaken, this should get us there.

This is correct. "Mr.Google" would come off as a bit funny or a joke.

But only if you want.

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Great job!

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sho

May 18, 2022

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If Mr. Google isn't mistaken, this should get us there.

Are there people who feel that I'm rude?

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selinalynn

May 19, 2022

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Are there people who feel that I'm rude?

Not rude. They might not know if it is a joke or not so they might not know how to react at first. The tone and body language is important for this sentence.

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sho

May 19, 2022

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Not rude. They might not know if it is a joke or not so they might not know how to react at first. The tone and body language is important for this sentence.

Ok, I got it!! 😂
Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

Giving directions 3


Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


You can change the order of the sentences, do whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people


I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


B: Excuse me?


Could you help me?


A: Yeah.


Sure.


B: Are we anywhere near the Sunrise hotel?


A: Oh, Sorry, I’m not sure.


Umm, if you're not in a rush, I'll look it up now.


Umm, if you're not in a rush, I'll can look it up now.

B: Oh, thank you.


A: No, worries.


Wait a minute.


Wait a minute.

Can also say: "Just a minute." or "Hold on a minute."

B: Okay.


A: Sunrise hotel, right?


B: Yes!


A: Okay.


If Mr. Google isn't mistaken, this should get us there.


If Mr. Google isn't mistaken, this should get us there.

This is correct. "Mr.Google" would come off as a bit funny or a joke.

Right this way.


B: Oh, are you gonna show me there?


A: Sure!


But if you want.


But only if you want.

B: Oh, thank you!


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