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May 17, 2022

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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.

B: Excuse me. Do you speak English?
A: Ah~, a little bit. haha
B: Ok, I’m looking for Ebisu station. Is there one around here?
A: It's not that far, so shall I take you there?
B: Oh, really?
A: Sure!
B: Thank you.
A: Yeah! Right, let's go!
B: Anyways, how long will it take to get there?
A: Well, I guess about ten minutes. Are you in a rush?
B: There’s no rush.
A: I think I'm right, but this is the first time for me to go to Ebisu station from this road, so please don't be mad if I'm wrong. haha
B: OK. haha

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Giving directions 2

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

You can change the order of the sentences, do whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people

I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️

By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.

B: Excuse me.

Do you speak English?

A: Ah~, a little bit.

haha

B: Ok, I’m looking for Ebisu station.

Is ithere one around here?

A: It's not that far, so shall I take you there?

"so" isn't incorrect but sounds a little unnatural. You could also say "should" instead of "shall" if you're looking to sound more casual

B: Oh, really?

A: Sure!

B: Thank you.

A: Yeah!

"No problem" would be a common response to "thank you", but you could also say "you're welcome". It tends to be that younger people say "no problem" and older people say "you're welcome" but it's your choice which one you want to use :)

Right, let's go!

B: Anyways, how long will it take to get there?

A: Well, I guess about ten minutes.

Are you in a rush?

B: There’s no rush.

A: I think I'm right, but this is themy first time for me to gogoing to Ebisu station from this road, so please don't be mad if I'm wrong.

What you wrote isn't incorrect, but it sounds a little awkward

haha

B: OK. haha

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Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


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You can change the order of the sentences, do whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people


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I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️


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By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.


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B: Excuse me.


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Do you speak English?


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A: Ah~, a little bit.


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haha


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B: Ok, I’m looking for Ebisu station.


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Is there one around here?


Is ithere one around here?

A: It's not that far, so shall I take you there?


A: It's not that far, so shall I take you there?

"so" isn't incorrect but sounds a little unnatural. You could also say "should" instead of "shall" if you're looking to sound more casual

B: Oh, really?


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A: Sure!


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B: Thank you.


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A: Yeah!


A: Yeah!

"No problem" would be a common response to "thank you", but you could also say "you're welcome". It tends to be that younger people say "no problem" and older people say "you're welcome" but it's your choice which one you want to use :)

Right, let's go!


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B: Anyways, how long will it take to get there?


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A: Well, I guess about ten minutes.


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Are you in a rush?


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B: There’s no rush.


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A: I think I'm right, but this is the first time for me to go to Ebisu station from this road, so please don't be mad if I'm wrong.


A: I think I'm right, but this is themy first time for me to gogoing to Ebisu station from this road, so please don't be mad if I'm wrong.

What you wrote isn't incorrect, but it sounds a little awkward

haha


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B: OK. haha


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